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Lucky Dove

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written

on heavens step

seven syllables i call it

changing fashion

dancing each line

thirteen verses steps to lucky

Touched softly by lips love dream white petals brushed dewdrops gem crimson rose life and soul lives Popping out angel vision desire holds light beholding most gracious beautiful queen Crowned sun rays kiss golden gift love you are pure driven white without thought like a drug bites Sweet addiction of need begs thirsting caring gentleness filled with goodness sweetly hugs smiling warmly touched a beat

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 12/17/2015 12:59:00 PM

Shared Sensitivity becomes flashlight in the dark.

Funom Makama

Date: 12/17/2015 4:25:00 AM

lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 12/17/2015 3:18:00 AM

lovely...feeling happy reading this :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/2/2015 1:38:00 PM

Wonderful feeling of love with romantic vibration that healing the heart. 7 sure. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/19/2015 12:35:00 PM

Liam Mate!! Methinks the "Leprechaun Choir" happily dictated this one to you over a couple of glasses of strong "Irish." Be that as it may, "Lucky Dove" is truly a fabulous write in every respect. The Leprechauns will be sing paeans of joy of this one!! Cheers and Best!! Gary (P.S. Expect movement soon on the "Animal of the Night" write!! -- GB)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/19/2015 9:42:00 AM

Hi Liam: A beautiful poem of whiteness.

Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/19/2015 9:43:00 AM

thank you, liam.

David Meade

Date: 11/18/2015 7:11:00 PM

Hey mate, that is some lovin angle -- sweet and wonderful! Nicely done.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/18/2015 2:17:00 PM

- Love it, my friend :) - hugs // :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/18/2015 1:57:00 PM

Hi Liam! Wow! Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I truly enjoy it! A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet !Magnificent!Just delightful!I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!I love your new poetry style also,so very beautiful too,Liam. Excellent imagery!Outstanding.Just perfect!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my prayers.Please take good care of yourself always.Keep your faith!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^