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Lucky 8- For Contest

"Lucky 8"

Recently, a Revelation had come to mind
Woman's Pulchritude has diminished so severely
And as a God Fearing man, I feel Discomfort dearly
Eight tales of heartbreak, why was that so easy for me to find
A Paragon I must be where the heart is concerned
For I Adore women for all that they have become
Their bodies are Blazing hot to the point I am dumb
So I mastered the art of Charisma, something every man should learn

July 28, 2018

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Susan Gentry

Date: 7/31/2018 9:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Well done. Interesting and creative.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/31/2018 2:51:00 PM

Hi Eric, Now this is a good entry for the contest. It's a winner in my book. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Take care my friend:-) Alexis

Maria Feliciano

Date: 7/30/2018 7:22:00 PM

Wonderful, good luck in the contest, I loved it. Wishing you the best, dear xoxo

Eric Boddie
Date: 7/30/2018 8:24:00 PM

thanks for the well wishes for the competition but i really dont care about winning them because i was inspired to write something so i already won....;)

Maria Feliciano

Date: 7/30/2018 7:19:00 PM

Thank you Eric Boddie, for your inspiring comment, I loved the way you fit every word in poetically. I loved it. You are very talented, I look forward to reading your work. ;) Xoxo

Eric Boddie
Date: 7/30/2018 8:22:00 PM

well thank you my friend and i look forward to reading more of your work as well....;)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/30/2018 1:25:00 PM

Such a wonderful poem this, I absolutely love reading it, good luck my friend and yeah many congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest, it is indeed a beauty

Eric Boddie
Date: 7/30/2018 2:41:00 PM

thank you so much, and you have such a good heart for the Faith you display my friend....

Eve Roper

Date: 7/30/2018 11:47:00 AM

Back with a Big Congratulations on your win sir... Yeah!!!!! Laura has good taste...

Eric Boddie
Date: 7/30/2018 2:40:00 PM

indeed laura does which is why you are a winner as well even though I won once the inspiration was acquired to write this selection....you are such a sweet, dear, tender lady mrs roper....;)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/30/2018 11:46:00 AM

Wonderful write for the contest .. Your eyes can see and your heart can feel... so much love for God.. Hugs Eve

Eric Boddie
Date: 7/30/2018 2:38:00 PM

God Is Truly All any of us has mrs roper and thank you dearly for the kind words and the support....;)

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/29/2018 8:33:00 PM

Poetry steadies thy hand, thy heart it does so truly use, on love' beauty thy stand, inspires my searching muse... Great free verse my friend. A fav and a shining gem too.

Eric Boddie
Date: 7/30/2018 2:37:00 PM

why thank you mr Robert....that means a lot coming from a poetic master such as yourself