Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Lucky

Lucky wasn’t.
Lucky was his nickname.
Lucky played around.
Lucky sunk his head into the dresser.
Knock Knock.
“Who’s there?”
The bed stopped rocking
and answered the emergency call.
The next day was sunny
and Brother D was working.
Brring…brring…
Yes, Lucky wasn’t.
He played around the recliner
and nicked his knee.
“What do you mean it’s another emergency?”
Twice in twenty-four, he scored.
Lucky was his nickname.
Lucky wasn’t.

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Paige Hind November 8, 2024 at 6:35 PM LOL I think you're a little crazy hahaha...but in a good way, :p

Valsa George November 4, 2024 at 9:15 PM Hi Kim, this is more than funny.... ! Poor Lucky always proving un- lucky! Really enjoyed this fun write. Kim Rodrigues November 4, 2024 at 9:28 PM Thanks, Valsa :)

Michael Tor November 2, 2024 at 3:46 PM I was lucky to see this Kim. So funny you are. lol. Reminded me of my ex boss Ed who had a picture of a dog with one eye,, a missing tail by the name of Lucky. It was a cartoon picture and it was hilarious this Poetry of yours reminded me of Lucky. Thanks for the smile... Kim Rodrigues November 2, 2024 at 4:48 PM Glad I could get a smile…lol