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Lucifer and Hooch

LUCIFER'S gullet was as parched as hell!

   He said, "Lord, some cold HOOCH, would do me well!"

      Lord said, "In thy condition,

         Smoldering in perdition,

            Not a snowball's chance in the place ye dwell!"

Entry for Catie Lindsey's  "L&H Limericks" Contest 

Took First Place in the contest.

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Barbara Gorelick Date: 6/2/2015 12:06:00 AM Proud of you!,, yippee...Wow! Neato! Great! Congrats. BG Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 5/29/2015 9:31:00 PM Great limerick, Bob! Well deserving of 1st place. Congrats! Love, Kim Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 6/2/2015 4:35:00 PM Thank you, Kim. I appreciate your support - bob

Eve Roper Date: 5/27/2015 8:57:00 PM How funny, Robert, a 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win. Login to Reply

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 5/27/2015 3:17:00 PM Great limerick Robert much enjoyed. Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/27/2015 5:52:00 PM Robert - glad you enjoyed the lim' and thx for your kind comment. Best to you - bob h

John Lawless Date: 5/27/2015 7:56:00 AM Robert, that's one HELLUVA limerick. Congrats on the top spot.. Login to Reply

Nandita Das Date: 5/26/2015 11:12:00 AM Congratulations!!! A truly deserving winner. 7...fav Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/26/2015 5:21:00 PM Nan, thank you so much for your kind comment and I'm honored that you consider it a 7 and one of your favs. Best to you - bob h

Paul Schneiter Date: 5/26/2015 7:09:00 AM Congratulations, Robert, on a richly deserved first-place win. Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 5/25/2015 10:43:00 PM Chuckles! Congratulations, Robert. Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/26/2015 5:22:00 PM Thank you Kim - I appreciate your gracious comments. bob h

Viv Wigley Date: 5/25/2015 9:39:00 PM A worthy win, Robert. Regards, Viv Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/25/2015 5:51:00 PM Bob H, Congrats on your L&H Limerick win. Love LINDA Login to Reply

Judy Konos Date: 5/25/2015 5:00:00 PM BIG CONGRATULATIONS Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/25/2015 7:33:00 PM Thank you Judy and thanks for your kind comments on other of my recent posts. Take good care - bob

Skat A Date: 5/25/2015 2:47:00 PM Wonderful win Bob.... Luv Skat Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 5/25/2015 2:09:00 PM Congrats my friend...well deserved win Login to Reply

MD Johnson Date: 5/25/2015 2:02:00 PM Very funny write and congratulations on the well deserved win. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/25/2015 1:31:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Bob :-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/25/2015 12:35:00 PM - A really great limerick (I do not understand where it comes from :)))) - Hope you've had a lovely weekend, Bob - Good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/25/2015 2:17:00 PM - CONGRATULATIONS !!!! - hugs :)

Emile Pinet Date: 5/23/2015 10:45:00 AM You paint a picture with words that brings a smile to the reader's lips. Good work! Emile. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/22/2015 9:47:00 PM ALL Right, another one for the devil dude! GREAT job, Robert. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/22/2015 1:13:00 PM LOL, I love this one and the one Andrea has on her poem list. Wishing you the best... Bob H., Always a Fan.... LINDA Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/21/2015 12:53:00 PM This is good and with an unusual theme, Robert. In my eyes, a winner. All the best. // paul Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/21/2015 6:39:00 PM thank you, Paul. I cherish your comments and continued support and encouragement - Bob

John Lawless Date: 5/21/2015 8:07:00 AM Well Robert this is the first biblically inspired limerick I have ever encountered. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/21/2015 6:38:00 PM thank you, John. Hope the good Lord won't take offense - ha! Best always - bob h

Tim Smith Date: 5/21/2015 7:28:00 AM Good one Bob.....I think many see Satan after some hooch Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/21/2015 6:37:00 PM thanks, Tim. I think you are right re Satan and hooch. Hope the Lord won't hold this one against me but I'm thinking he might be smiling about this one as well - Bob

Jan Allison Date: 5/21/2015 1:21:00 AM Very clever Robert - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/21/2015 6:36:00 PM Always appreciate your kind comments, Jan. Have a grand weekend - Bob h

Judy Konos Date: 5/20/2015 11:15:00 PM Excellent.....clever....and nice Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/21/2015 6:35:00 PM Thank you, Judy - glad you enjoyed. Hope your Memorial Weekend is a relaxing one - bob

Nandita Das Date: 5/20/2015 10:47:00 PM Very humorous and witty. This one is awesome. Looks like a winner. A#7 Login to Reply Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 5/21/2015 6:35:00 PM Thank you Nan. I wanted to come up with something about Laural and Hardy but someone else beat me to it. Have a relaxing Memorial Day Weekend - bob h

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