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Like stars when they show bright and clear against the heavens’ midnight blue! That’s how I want things to appear - like stars when they show bright and clear, as seen through telescopes, brought near so I can comprehend the view. Like stars when they show bright and clear against the heavens’ midnight blue. Oct. 17, 2017 For Broken Wing's "Could You Please" Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/22/2017 6:43:00 PM
Beautiful theme, beautiful Triolet poem, Andrea. Any poem that has stars and telescopes in it, gets my poetic seal of approval. Very artfully done, dear. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 10/21/2017 8:59:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this pretty Triolet, I really like this form !
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Date: 10/20/2017 11:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, so enchanting great write . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/20/2017 10:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with a beautiful poem. Triolet is a great form. thank
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Date: 10/20/2017 5:38:00 PM
Back with congratulations Andrea xomo!
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Date: 10/20/2017 10:35:00 AM
Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/18/2017 2:53:00 PM
if only life was so crystal clear... I would think the stars in Iowa are very bright
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Date: 10/18/2017 9:57:00 AM
indeed, if all things shined so bright and beautiful... and yet then what good would be the stars? thank you for a wonderful read! I really really like this one.
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Date: 10/18/2017 5:15:00 AM
I loved this one exquisitely! A Triolet, I haven't seen this form in awhile, thank you for writing one, it's a beautiful form, and you have shown it's awesome greatness by your terrific skill! What a brilliant piece my friend, such a harmonious poem filled with reverence and awe, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/17/2017 6:55:00 PM
I'm with Charlie, have to say it, lucidity :) wonderful pen Andrea xomo!
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Date: 10/17/2017 3:23:00 PM
Lucidity, what a great word, tough form made to look very easy, great work Andrea...
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Date: 10/17/2017 3:08:00 PM
Thanks for introducing me to the triolet form - I don't think I'd ever seen one. Yours is lovely.
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