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Lows and Extremes

The truth of reality haunts your soul, lamenting the innocence childhood stole. A hungry heart, forever starved of love, is always broken; it never feels whole. You didn't find love on the wings of a dove, so push inevitably turned to shove. And yet, normality included hope, and your willingness to partake thereof. You constantly feel unable to cope, always dangling at the end of your rope. And frustrated with an absentee God, you start sliding down a slippery slope. The fact that the world never spared the rod proved unconditional love was a fraud. And an incompleteness shadows your dreams, retracing the steps you've already trod. Hope's magic has become too weak to cast, Exhausted, its power degraded fast. Lonely and unloved, you await life's end, Praying that in death, you'll find love at last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/13/2018 10:47:00 AM
Wow - Striking use of this lovely rhythmic form. Especially with the meaningful acrostic for your closing stanza. Brilliantly done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:06:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your visits are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 9/27/2016 5:46:00 PM
Hello Emile, Wonderful verses. Perfectly correct series of Rubai.... My favorite is the last Rubai........Now you're an honorary Persian. Omar Khayyam is proud of you.
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Date: 9/26/2016 1:31:00 PM
Such a sad writ Emile I can relate to this in my own life with my father and I still have yet to grieve for him - I am closer to my mother than ever before and for that I am truly blessed:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/26/2016 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Jan, your words have touched my heart. Emile.
Date: 9/17/2016 8:02:00 PM
This is exquisite in it's sadness, Emile, hope it is not a reflection of your personal life, but if so remember we all deserved to be loved, and deserve to be loved. My story is similar so I understand, only I learned about God's love long ago, and because I believe it, I do feel loved, and hope never subsides, only resides, and no human can take that away.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/18/2016 10:26:00 AM
Thanks John, the poem is based on my childhood but I've moved on past such emotions and have found happiness in life. Thanks again my friend, you are a kind soul. Emile.
Date: 9/15/2016 8:39:00 PM
I can relate to this poignant piece Emile, only in my case it was my mother that did not spare the rod. I hope that love encircles you as time passes and you will feel complete. Hope you are feeling much better dear friend! Hugs and love, Connie xxxooo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/16/2016 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Connie, we share many feelings about life, for we have experienced similar emotions that have opened our hearts to happiness and drowned our sorrows in tears...God bless you my friend, it is always a joy to hear from you. My health is improving, thanks for asking. Emile.

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