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Loving Yuck

Love without
Love within
Love where I am
where I’ve been

Beginning to think:
far too much abundance 
of this foolish, loving folly, 

so I kicked my
wagging tail collie -- 

loving view~
it just ain’t fair! – attempting to escape,
I journeyed to the zoo

wouldn’t you know it,
two loving ape there too

along to the park
high in birch nest
spied I a pair of nurturing
lark, near
another pair of
snuggling Red Breast -- 


two nests,  

fondly sharing, the same supporting limb

depressingly glim...

a loving co-op I must confess – such loving
caress – sadly, much more loving
needing my critical address: 

a young boy helping
an old lady off the bus~
gentle, avoiding painful
fuss

a bow-haired girl 
giving a bowl of milk to a feral cat
(I prefer a brat!) -- 
Expressing pure love
by her selfless care, makes a
ornery boy cuss

for a devout prune-face like me
I disapprovingly profess

this entire day, 
a freaking loving Mess!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 4/25/2025 9:04:00 AM
Dear Joe, This is such a witty and clever poem on love , how youv written and highlighted on how love is all around but at the same time while also it feels like love is missing, i really love the opening especially "Love without Love within Love where I am where I’ve been" drew me right in and its so intriguing too, pleasure reading this unique write which delivers so much! Sending you light always.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/25/2025 9:24:00 AM
Hi Empress; sometimes rallying against something, will more serve to highlight significance, than discourage practice or belief. Just a fun write. So pleased you enjoyed the read. Thank you for commenting.
Date: 4/24/2025 10:17:00 AM
In that loving mess there is the memory of the heart that seems to always put everything back in its place, especially when it comes to poetry !
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/25/2025 9:25:00 AM
"memory of the heart that seems to always put everything back in its place" -- Love that! Thank you, Vie.
Date: 4/24/2025 6:26:00 AM
- Great written with humor, Joe :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/25/2025 9:26:00 AM
Hi Anne; thank you. Have beautiful day!
Date: 4/23/2025 9:19:00 PM
OK, Joe. Pull that tongue out of your cheek now... Great write. Thoroughly enjoyed, gw
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/24/2025 4:49:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon; getting to truth sometimes, the best way, is doing everything in one's power attempting to disprove.
Date: 4/23/2025 10:45:00 AM
Such contradictions of thought! Loved “I prefer a brat.”
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/23/2025 1:52:00 PM
Yuck!:)) All in fun. Thank you, Kim.

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