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Loving Years

Dark honey tanned skin glistens
    From the moisture of humidity.
The ladies flirt shamelessly with 
    You, but your eyes gaze upon me.

Your stature looms at six foot three.
    Your swimmer's shoulders impress.
In our island sea we swim leisurely,
    Traces of salt remain as you dress.

White sandy beaches, ever your haven.
    We sip Riesling as the stars appear.
Nestled in your arms,  time takes flight.
    I feel so safe when you are near.

Your strength amply hides a tender heart.
    The depth of your voice all admire.
When we first met I became enamored,
    Feelings that quickly turned to desire.

We have shared so much over the years.
    More happiness than dark sorrows.
Family treasures that brightly shine,
      Reigning with love into our tomorrows.

In the autumn of our lives I feel the chill
    Of winter's inevitable harsh advance,
Yet days of youth remain in our hearts,
    Memories held, that time shall enhance.


Poem of the Day October 27, 2017

Late October Standard Contest-Third Place
Sponsor Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Schneiter Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:52 AM
This is a gem, a jewel . . . absolutely first rate (wish I had written it). "Reigning with love into our tomorrows"--an especially wonderful line in a poem full of wonderful lines. Bravo. Hugs, always, Paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Thank you very much Paul. xxoo : )
Chappell Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 8:32 AM
congratulations beautiful write x
Gauthier Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 8:31 PM
Charming and romantic. Well done, Connie.
Shaw Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 5:52 PM
That is a beautiful heartfelt poem and magnificently written, you have a wonderful gift, kind regards, Kevin x
Nusker Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Suffused with loving emotions, this lovely love poem of yours. Congrats on your win & POTD.
Wigley Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 10:08 PM
A poem both, hot, warm, and pretty cool, too. And a loving ending. you are blessed, Connie. Viv x
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 4:36 AM
Thank you Viv. I do feel we are blessed. I appreciate your visit and hope you are well. : )
Godwin Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 4:50 PM
I don't know whether I'm going to cry or stop typing and clap. I'm thinking, perfect, I am perfectly moved by this perfect feeling poem so emotionally beautiful ... CayCay
Snyder Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 2:40 PM
Sweet, memories enhance, nice write
Lindley Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 9:18 AM
My friend, congrats on POTD AND THE NUMBER ONE SPOT TOO. This gem is tender, strong, romantic and elegant in its beauty! Truly deserving of its accolades given, IMHO. You never fail in delivering top class poetry! A fav...
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 7:00 PM
Robert, Thank you so much for your generous praise. It means so much to me when someone faves one of my poems. I really appreciate your lovely comments and fave my friend. Blessings, Connie
Barden Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:50 AM
This is very nice, Connie - such a beautiful and romantic write - full of love. Congrats on number one!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 7:03 PM
Thank you very much Greg. My daughter and her boyfriend have been visiting the past week from No. California so I haven't had time to be online. : )
Wastvedt Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 5:46 PM
Beautiful! :)
Breedt Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 3:32 AM
I am back again to visit my esteemed poet who slammed the number one spot. Tremendous Congratulations
Wanter Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 11:39 AM
I loved this when I first read it - I thought I had told you so. I tell you now you can feel the love in it. Congratulations on your placement on the New Best Poems list.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Wow, thank you Sunlite. I just saw it at the top of the list today. I told my husband about. I appreciate your lovely comment! : )
Y. Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Hi Connie, You penned such a beautiful and romantic write. I enjoyed the "down to earth "tone of this piece as well. All accolades that you have gotten for this well written piece was well deserved. Congratulations on having the number 1 spot on the "new" best poems list:-) Alexis
Hamilton Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 11:12 PM
Congrats Connie on having the new number 1 poem, very worthy, loved it even more second read!
Breedt Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:03 PM
Hi Connie, sipping Riesling in his arms? How romantic. I replied to your very welcome email but it was blocked by Yahoo due to the political content. Read my latest poem which give you a clue please
Fleming Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 10:21 AM
This is a stunning piece of poetry, Connie...I am deeply impressed. What a beautiful tribute you have penned -- deserves POTW! My very warmest regards and best wishes as always. Your friend. :) john
Schiavina Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations! Beautiful feelings so well expressed.
Inman Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 8:30 AM
A lovely poem with beautiful emotion Connie.
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 5:43 AM
- A little late, but ... Congratulations on p.o.t.d. - Beautiful poem, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 10:14 AM
BIG congrats on your POTD. YOu deserved it with THIS one, dear.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 11:43 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. I appreciate you faving this one as it is a special tribute to my husband. hugs, Connie
Hamilton Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 8:24 PM
Lovely heartfelt poem Connie an example of what love should be, even after so many years!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 11:36 PM
Thank you very much John. We have been married for 36 years this December 4th. : )
Onclaud Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 6:52 PM
so precious a write, dear connie... congrats on your remarkable win and a POTD feature!... love endures!..hugggs
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 11:37 PM
Thank you very much Nette. It made my day! hugs, Connie
Callus Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 5:27 PM
What lovely and romantic memories, Connie! Oh to be able to turn back the clock (and not just by one hour)!! ~ Belated congrats on POTD award, too:) Regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 11:42 PM
I want to keep everything as it is, but turn in my aching body for a fresh new one...Haha. Thank you Paul. : )
Daniel Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 11:13 AM
Such a heartfelt love poem, Connie, warms my heart:) wishing you and your husband all the very best in your life together:) congratulations on POTD:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 11:38 PM
Thank you Jo. We have health issues as many do as they age but we have understanding and love which keeps us together. : )
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