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Loves Trials Senryu

I Her name rhymes with serene Patience unheard of - unseen God sent me my queen II Hope fluttered, sank low Stagnating whirlpool edges Then the flow - loves cascade

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/25/2022 10:40:00 AM

A creative Haiku write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away......................

Valsa George

Date: 3/5/2022 7:53:00 AM

Love cascades from your writes, Anil !

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/4/2022 12:19:00 PM

Anything worth having is worth fighting for. God and you are a majority. Hang in there.

Anil Deo
Date: 3/5/2022 12:45:00 AM

Love your visit & comment Father DeMino, amen. Shalom shalom

Bill Baker

Date: 3/4/2022 8:10:00 AM

Nice flow to your Haiku, Anil. Very enjoyable read, Bill

Anil Deo
Date: 3/5/2022 12:45:00 AM

Bill, a joy tobhavevu visit, fir Kingdom glory in Jesus's Nm amen

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/4/2022 8:05:00 AM

You are a cascade of sweet water when you write, and I'm the lucky one who gets to read it, and comment first lol ;)

Anil Deo
Date: 3/5/2022 12:44:00 AM

Blessings, yes, your visit is full of Grace, amen