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Loves Trials Senryu

I
Her name rhymes with serene
Patience unheard of - unseen
God sent me my queen
II
Hope fluttered, sank low
Stagnating whirlpool edges
Then the flow - loves cascade

Copyright © Anil Deo | Year Posted 2022

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Paula Goldsmith

March 25, 2022 at 10:40 AM

A creative Haiku write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away......................

March 5, 2022 at 7:53 AM

Love cascades from your writes, Anil !

Joseph P. DiMino

March 4, 2022 at 12:19 PM

Anything worth having is worth fighting for. God and you are a majority. Hang in there.

March 5, 2022 at 12:45 AM

Love your visit & comment Father DeMino, amen. Shalom shalom

March 4, 2022 at 8:10 AM

Nice flow to your Haiku, Anil. Very enjoyable read, Bill

March 5, 2022 at 12:45 AM

Bill, a joy tobhavevu visit, fir Kingdom glory in Jesus's Nm amen

Mystic Rose Rose

March 4, 2022 at 8:05 AM

You are a cascade of sweet water when you write, and I'm the lucky one who gets to read it, and comment first lol ;)

March 5, 2022 at 12:44 AM

Blessings, yes, your visit is full of Grace, amen

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