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Love's Requisition

I come to your bedside once more, you've poured our photos and poetry on the floor an act of apostasy, a grim admission, the room in dim depression, laying on your side , cheeks heated and soaked in sorrow, your joy in remission, Refusing to look at me, as if seeing this face would invite a fatal grief, hating me yet loving me because I am the wound waking belief, a living scar fueling faith in the survival of our love, needing me to be your spiritual shove, I lay along you, gripping your tender arm, still, you do not disarm, the tip of my nose surfs the skin of your shoulder, I smell the tears of my harm, trying to explain that love is never wrong, that in your heart is where I belong you roll into my chest, a gorgeous heat of anger escapes your glare,the sting strong, in a fevered whimper, throat bubbled, you ask, how can I dare love you in absentia, how can you love a kiss that cuts, a breath that bruises, nails of nostalgia, oh how love makes us suffer for the truth of our hearts, I say, there is no absence within the Absolute, a fusion of soul parts, The onomatopoeia of my heart is ready to be splayed into you, I kiss bite the supple muscle of your neck, you release a searing sigh the air spiced with the oil of a woman's want, I need the salvation of your hot opening, I yearn to super charge your core, my balls, plump and heavy fall over your thigh, breast spread softly, your hands enveloping my back, heels hooking around calves the root of my Being swells to true and thick form red oak stretching into your moistened magenta earth, tenderloins contracting, pushing, smacking, a metamorphosis matures to cure our crisis, I can see in your eyes a soul that flies on a light beam without ending, one touch more and death will be a thing of lies, rebuild love with me and find warmth never wanning, we become Angels with no age lovers without rage or confusion, a new universe of raw pleasure and instincts sage, dreams witnessed in the sweat and steam of sacred revolution - J.A.B.

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Date: 7/19/2014 5:15:00 AM
a7rating for this strong and passionate write, Justin. Love is a conqueror, a healer and a giver. Your unique style of writing is truly captivating. well done! // paul
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/20/2014 8:10:00 PM
Thank you for the 7 Honor Paul. Love impells us to disover who we are, and what we can be. I am elated that a veteran Poet appreciates my novelty, and the affection I share with this phenomenal woman. J.A.B.
Date: 7/18/2014 1:34:00 PM
Here I am, once again, Justin, Touché to all the comments below....... Love and life get's gloomy on all ends. This is very deep. Once again you've touched us with a heartfelt poem, ready to fly. Every line is quilted and worn perfectly...... Sending smiles to all....... Always & Forever~~~~ Linda
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/18/2014 8:25:00 PM
I love it when you kiss my wings Linda. This poem is about love surviving the storms, sunshine recoloring the gloom of heartache to bloom as something brilliant and indestructible. With you Always Linda...Justin
Date: 7/18/2014 1:17:00 PM
Justin, it's an honor to read your poem, and feel the connection. Today, I walk high on heels. Thinking of you and your words. A muse, -to be, -every part, -of me, -you are. My heart sings, and sank at the same time, as I read this poem many times. I'm under a rustic moon right now. However, your words shed light into my soul, it's as if you know what a women wants. I'm captivated, and charmed by your passion. The ink of your pen floats, deep within every note you push my way. You are brilliant you are the word love! Love comes with no warning. So much I zoned out, and still I fall upon your pages. Love EVE
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/18/2014 8:09:00 PM
I can feel the lips of your heart pulling open my soul's song for you Luv. I've never loved a woman the way I do you. What we've made together is legendary, and our love remains young, and our saga has more to reveal. I love you Eve...Justin
Date: 7/15/2014 7:21:00 PM
You weave such an intoxicating tale filled with pure want. Brilliant Justin, just brilliant.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/15/2014 9:29:00 PM
Pure love Riverbank, intoxicating impulse, irrevocable in need. Your response, and visit are beauteous with benefit, thank you. J.A.B.
Date: 7/13/2014 3:17:00 PM
You certainly create, with words the essence of lust and love. Superlative writing, Justin. bfn Lainie
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/14/2014 2:02:00 AM
She and I created this essence of lust and love together Lainie. My words are the voice of my heart. J.A.B.
Date: 7/11/2014 2:12:00 PM
Raw, steamy, sensual. A magnificent write.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/11/2014 2:30:00 PM
A magnificent write for a magnificent Love...J.A.B.
Date: 7/10/2014 11:03:00 AM
how deep is your pen, Justin... just beautiful and visceral!.. huggs
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/10/2014 11:43:00 AM
My Quill tip reaches the deepest depth of divinity with this love...J.A.B.
Date: 7/9/2014 7:06:00 PM
I like these lines- “how can you love a kiss that cuts, a breath that bruises, nails of nostalgia, oh how love makes us suffer for the truth of our hearts, I say, there is no absence within the Absolute, a fusion of soul parts” those last four lines too... I love it all!!! fav for sure Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/9/2014 8:51:00 PM
Laura, I love the way you consume my Art, my heart work, the you chew it, ingest,process,assimilate, translate and mostly, how you feel the meaning. Thank you Laura! Thank you so much...J.A.B.
Date: 7/9/2014 7:02:00 PM
The fourth and fifth stanza, not to mention, are amazing, bursting with the colorful descriptiveness I so admire in all of your pieces. You’ve got everything-the physical of course, and uniquely expressed, the spiritual and the psychological. Love balances all of these, and you really brought that out in an exceedingly animated, sensual and extraordinary way. Raw and riveting, I am looking forward to reading some more. Thank you!
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Date: 7/9/2014 7:01:00 PM
Hello Justin. I read this the other day and had to come back again. This is a masterpiece! Outstanding inspiration and such staggering imagery. I like how this intimate love dissipates the sadness and depressing setup you developed in the beginning. I agree with JS Lambert.. I love your literal use of the word "onomatopoeia" as well. There is so much vibrant color in this poem. Stanza three gives a lot of depth to the other, and the relationship of these two. –
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Date: 7/8/2014 6:59:00 PM
A great poem on Love and passion. Love is never wrong, when it comes from the heart. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/8/2014 10:29:00 PM
Its all about the source Lucilla, you got it right my wise friend! It was so vital to me that I harmonized love's strain/metaphysics, intimacy, and spirituality to honor my love Muse and I. J.A.B.
Date: 7/8/2014 4:36:00 PM
wow, very raw and passionate writing .Hot hot hot!!! (great imagery too)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/8/2014 10:25:00 PM
Yeah Andrea, we're hot and extreme in every way. Glad you like the intensity and soul of this special write my friend. J.A.B.
Date: 7/8/2014 1:47:00 AM
explosive write from the soul's eyes, justin... great artwork!.. huggs
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/8/2014 2:33:00 AM
Yes Nette, the soul's eyes and the heart's touch. Thank you. J.A.B.
Date: 7/7/2014 9:57:00 AM
This is why I'm drawn to your writing...It is hewn from the heart. It is raw. It is intense. It is passionate. It is enticing. It is inciting. You are one of my absolute favorite poets, Justin. You are a poet warrior. All the more power to you.
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Date: 7/7/2014 8:25:00 PM
To have you drawn to my soul's work is a real reward Eileen. Your feelings feed my heart a priceless ambrosia. I am simply soaring into the lights of joy with your comment, thank you! This poem is so special to me. J.A.B.