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Love's Rejection

My job took me up north to teach people computer skills, and that is where I met Jack- he was a wilderness guide. He was wild and free and seemed full of pride. Jack fascinated me! Many hours we spent talking of things, we had a lot in common, I was Ojibwe- he was Cree. He took me to his cabin and our love had wings, and words of love were cried; his hands on my body gave me sweet chills. But, after that amazing night of love he seemed distant, I asked him repeatedly but his face was stone, those eyes were so cold and all love had flown, I felt like a dumb fool! Not ready to give up, I was witty, he did not seem to care and often his words were cruel. His love for me had been so false and he had only pity! I wanted to moan and groan, for his rejection of love that was nonexistent. I left- for a long time, I wished his name on a headstone, yet, still, still in my heart, I wept for this man I had known. ____________________________ March 19, 2017 Rhyme/Love's Rejection Copyright Protected, ID 885688 Having A Love For Someone And It Is Not Returned Brenda Chiri Second Place
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Smith Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Tearfully I congratulate you Constance, well done...
Kimathi Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 8:39 AM
So emotional, and very well-written..... Congrats BW, for your well-deserved second placement in the contest!! ;-)
Canerdy Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 4:51 PM
A7 for your winning poem, Constance! Janice
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March 23, 2017 at 11:03 AM
Power to truth this poem is, BW. I think most everyone has experienced this awful feeling. The singing group, Main Ingredients summed it us best in their song, "Everybody Plays the Fool." A lovingly sad poem, but so full of truth. A 7 for this poetic gem. Love and hugs to you.
Dalei Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 10:25 PM
Well penned. Best wishes for the contest...............//hugs//Manmath
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 6:11 PM
Been there, been done by, or undone by that. Eloquently penned, good luck in the contest xomo
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