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Loves Reflection

Behind me in the mirror 

Hot breath gently on my neck

Red satin bow falls to floor

Exposed gift adored... 





Contest: Red

Sponsored by  Francine Roberts

Form: Dodoitsu

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 22, 2011 at 11:51 AM

Congratulations Sharon,on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

February 5, 2011 at 10:05 AM

Awesome poem, Sharon, I am glad to finally see it! Congratulations. Luv, Andrea

Robert Pettit

February 4, 2011 at 5:12 PM

Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.

Joyce Johnson

February 4, 2011 at 5:06 PM

congratulations on your win in this fun contest. Love, Joyce

Kory Calhoun

February 4, 2011 at 2:55 PM

Hi Sharon - Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kash Poet

February 4, 2011 at 12:59 PM

Congrats Sharon on your well deserved big win in this contest of Francine!---kashinath

James Fraser

February 4, 2011 at 10:59 AM

Mm, I love it Sharon. It's a beautiful poem with images, oh images. Many congrats on your most deserved win in the contest....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

February 4, 2011 at 9:59 AM

Your wonderful, steamy write earned you a well-deserved big win, Sharon. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 4, 2011 at 8:07 AM

Congrats Shar on your winning poem in the RED contest with this exciting entry my friend... so nice to see u sitting at the top of this one luv.. enjoy...

Tahera Mannan

February 4, 2011 at 6:51 AM

Wow and hot.Many congratulations for this success.

John Freeman

February 4, 2011 at 6:11 AM

Great to see you at the top Sharon, Enjoy. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

February 4, 2011 at 1:33 AM

simply awesome, sharon!! congrats on the big win..;) huggs, nette

Francine Roberts

February 3, 2011 at 11:28 PM

congrats on your second place win in my contest Sharon, love this

Christopher Marcum

February 3, 2011 at 11:43 AM

smile -- i read this amazingly beautiful moment brushed in tender softness yesterday my dear and i wished to return unto, your beauty, along with its lovely reflection amid the mirror of something very, enchantingly sweet for, its beautiful colours unfold such warmth within these gentle images of hues, painted in love; absolutely spellbinding and, a beautiful fave -- love, christopher