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Love's Priceless Treasures

Lover #1 love's priceless treasures floats free in river of time frost kills emotions Lover#2 my eyes speak volumes shimmer and glimmer like stars dark velvet soft nights wait gently for wedding bells as frost melts into bright spring

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Tahera in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Love Talks". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/14/2011 5:15:00 AM

Tahera, congratulations on your HM in Debbie's contest :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/13/2011 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations on garnering honorable mention in Deb's contest with this fine entry.

John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2011 1:08:00 PM

Congratulations Tahera on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/13/2011 12:39:00 PM

Im glad your melting frost poem put you in the winners circle. Enjoyed. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/13/2011 11:47:00 AM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Debbie, Tahera

Kash Poet

Date: 3/12/2011 8:28:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your HM win in the contest--kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2011 7:33:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your HM in Love Talks contest with this awesome dialogue between the two lovers my friend.. enjoy your very special honor as I will enjoy mine too..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/12/2011 4:18:00 PM

Magnificent writing, Tahera. At first you describe the frost, but then you have it melting into spring just in time for the wedding. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/12/2011 4:07:00 PM

Very sweet. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2011 3:56:00 PM

Tahera. Too bad there were NOT double spots this time so that you could have been in top ten. I just loved that Lover 2's reply. Congatulations to you.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/6/2011 4:35:00 AM

this is an excellent write from you Tahera;A great entry in the contest--kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/5/2011 11:42:00 AM

This is really a wonderful entry for Debbie's contest-- enjoyed how you put in frost at the end of the first and "melting" it at the end of the 2nd write- way to go Tahera :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/5/2011 4:52:00 AM

By jove I think you've GOT it ;) [title ---love's priceless treasures..lower case please] so glad someone has been "listening!" phew! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2011 10:04:00 PM

So lovely, Tahera. Gosh, I need to get to work on this one too. have you noticed we are being flooded lately with contests?? I hope yours does well in the contest.