Tahera Mannan Poet Haiku

Love's Priceless Treasures

Lover #1
love's priceless treasures
floats free in river of time
frost kills emotions

Lover#2
my eyes speak volumes
shimmer and glimmer like stars
dark velvet soft nights
wait gently for wedding bells
as frost melts into bright spring

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 14, 2011 at 5:57 AM Congratulations on your win Tahera in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Love Talks". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels March 14, 2011 at 5:15 AM Tahera, congratulations on your HM in Debbie's contest :)

Robert Pettit March 13, 2011 at 6:04 PM Congratulations on garnering honorable mention in Deb's contest with this fine entry.

John Freeman March 13, 2011 at 1:08 PM Congratulations Tahera on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick March 13, 2011 at 12:39 PM Im glad your melting frost poem put you in the winners circle. Enjoyed. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta March 13, 2011 at 11:47 AM Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Debbie, Tahera

Kash Poet March 12, 2011 at 8:28 PM Congrats Tahera on your HM win in the contest--kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 12, 2011 at 7:33 PM Congrats Tahera on your HM in Love Talks contest with this awesome dialogue between the two lovers my friend.. enjoy your very special honor as I will enjoy mine too..

Carolyn Devonshire March 12, 2011 at 4:18 PM Magnificent writing, Tahera. At first you describe the frost, but then you have it melting into spring just in time for the wedding. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson March 12, 2011 at 4:07 PM Very sweet. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2011 at 3:56 PM Tahera. Too bad there were NOT double spots this time so that you could have been in top ten. I just loved that Lover 2's reply. Congatulations to you.

Kash Poet March 6, 2011 at 4:35 AM this is an excellent write from you Tahera;A great entry in the contest--kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 5, 2011 at 11:42 AM This is really a wonderful entry for Debbie's contest-- enjoyed how you put in frost at the end of the first and "melting" it at the end of the 2nd write- way to go Tahera :)

Debbie Guzzi March 5, 2011 at 4:52 AM By jove I think you've GOT it ;) [title ---love's priceless treasures..lower case please] so glad someone has been "listening!" phew! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2011 at 10:04 PM So lovely, Tahera. Gosh, I need to get to work on this one too. have you noticed we are being flooded lately with contests?? I hope yours does well in the contest.