Pandita Sietesantos Poet Free verse

Love's Like Sugar Cane

Love's Like Sugar Cane

Tender tendrils
of the same vine, 
we entwine
with hearts a fluttering, 
beating ecstatically as one, 
floating on wings
of iridescent butterflies, 
satisfyingly satiated by
love juices squeezed from an  
orange, bright summer day. 
Cherry blossom kisses 
from pink juicy lips, 
sprouting silky petals 
that pucker and quiver,
anticipating warm, tropical, 
sugar cane, sweet licks. 
Blissfully drunk with love, 
we sip and dip 
into the golden syrupy
ocean of us.


07-24-2015   

Contest:      The Poet's Fire (12-07-2017)
Sponsor:     Gregory R Barden
Placement:  1st

Contest:      A Sexy Surreal (06-11-2017)
Sponsor:     Lewis Raynes
Plaement:    3rd

Contest:      One of your Best (01-07-2016)
Sponsor:     Rob Carmack
Placement:  4th

Contest:      Shweet Free Verse (07-29-2015)
Sponsor:     Andrea Dietrich
Placement:  3rd

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DM Babbit December 12, 2017 at 11:04 AM Just wonderful expressions, loved your poem, congrats on your win. Well deserved. Pandita Sietesantos December 17, 2017 at 4:18 PM Thank you kindly my dear DM for your kind congratulations which I so very much appreciate! All the best to you. Pandita

Sandra Haight December 9, 2017 at 3:49 PM Pandita, congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win for your beautifully-written poem! Hugs, Sandra Pandita Sietesantos December 10, 2017 at 8:55 AM Hi Sandra, your lovely compliments warm my heart and sweetened my day!:-) Thank you so much for stopping by, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

John Hamilton December 8, 2017 at 11:43 AM Wonderful sensuous write, worthy first place winner! Pandita Sietesantos December 8, 2017 at 11:52 AM Dear John, thank you kindly for your high praises which mean a lot to me! Best wishes. Pandita

Joseph May December 8, 2017 at 9:33 AM Congrats on your top win Pandita Pandita Sietesantos December 8, 2017 at 10:24 AM Hi Joseph, many thanks, my friend for your kind congratulatory words! Have a relaxing weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 8, 2017 at 7:28 AM What a delectable pen Pandita! Congratulations on your top win! xomo! Pandita Sietesantos December 8, 2017 at 8:03 AM Hi Maureen, thank you so very much for your high praises which mean a lot to me! All the very best to you! Pandita

Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2017 at 7:13 AM A delicious mix of imagery! Congrat, Pandita, on your top win! Pandita Sietesantos December 8, 2017 at 10:26 AM Hi Kim, it's nice to hear from you. Thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments. Have a beautiful weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Peter Rees December 8, 2017 at 5:35 AM Congratulations on your very fine poem and your well-deserved win. Pandita Sietesantos December 8, 2017 at 10:19 AM Awwww! Thank you so much, Peter! I appreciate your kind words! Best wishes. Pandita

Gregory Richard Barden December 7, 2017 at 11:38 PM Pandita - this was so rife with innuendo, metaphor, imagery, and creative excellence, ALL of it very sensual and sexy - this just bowled me over! Congratulations on FIRST PLACE, and thank you so much for your patience. Blessings! :-) Pandita Sietesantos December 8, 2017 at 8:08 AM Hi Gregory, thank you so very much for giving First Place to this piece! I am honored and super thrilled! Hugs and best wishes! Pandita

Teddy Kimathi June 13, 2017 at 2:16 PM Hi Pandita. Congrats for your well, deserved 3rd placement in the contest!! ;-) Pandita Sietesantos June 14, 2017 at 12:37 PM Hi Teddy, thank you so very much for your high praises which mean a lot to me! Best wishes. Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong June 12, 2017 at 5:59 PM Wow Pandita this is sensational and very sensual! I see why it is a top winner. Congratulations! : ) Pandita Sietesantos June 13, 2017 at 10:00 AM Dear Connie, your lovely compliments warm my heart and sweeten my day!:-) Thank you so much for stopping by, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Chris Green June 12, 2017 at 3:01 PM This was gorgeous my friend, so sticky sweet and sugary sensual. Congrats on you placement in the contest. Pandita Sietesantos June 13, 2017 at 10:00 AM Hi Chris, thank you so very much for your high praises which mean a lot to me! All the very best to you! Pandita

Joseph May June 12, 2017 at 6:24 AM Sweet ecstasy...Congrats on your win Pandita Pandita Sietesantos June 12, 2017 at 12:17 PM Awwww! Thank you so much, dear Joseph! I appreciate your kind words! Hugs. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A January 13, 2016 at 11:11 PM PANDITA, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~ Pandita Sietesantos January 14, 2016 at 12:06 PM Hi Linda, thank you so very much for your kind congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita

Kim Merryman January 11, 2016 at 6:22 PM Beautiful imagery in this sensual write, Pandita! Congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Kim Pandita Sietesantos January 12, 2016 at 11:15 AM Thank you kindly my dear friend for your sweet congratulations which I so very much appreciate! All the best to you. Pandita

Teddy Kimathi January 9, 2016 at 3:42 AM Greetings Pandita. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-) Pandita Sietesantos January 9, 2016 at 5:31 PM Hi Teddy, you're so sweet for leaving me your lovely compliments and congratulations! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Skat A January 8, 2016 at 7:39 PM Pandita, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT Pandita Sietesantos January 9, 2016 at 5:27 PM Hi Skat, thank you so very much for your high praises which mean a lot to me! All the very best to you! Pandita

Jean Mcloughlin January 7, 2016 at 2:01 PM Such an inspiring write Pandita!! Congrats. From Jean Pandita Sietesantos January 9, 2016 at 5:33 PM Thank you, thank you, dear Jean, for visiting and leaving your lovely compliments! Enjoy your day! Pandita

Balveen Cheema January 7, 2016 at 1:33 PM Congrats Pandita! Who wouldn't be drunk with such a read? Pandita Sietesantos January 9, 2016 at 5:29 PM Hi Balveen, thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments. You helped to make my day brighter! All the best. Pandita

Constance La France August 9, 2015 at 9:44 PM Pandita congratulations on your win with this beauty and thanks for visiting my poem, February Pandita Sietesantos August 9, 2015 at 9:51 PM Oh, thank you kindly my dear friend for your sweet congratulations which I so very much appreciate! Have a restful night, BW! Pandita

Robert Lindley August 1, 2015 at 10:20 PM Congrats on this fine win my friend! Amazing poem and being blissfully drunk with love, I can testify to the ocean being syrupy.. A7 Pandita Sietesantos August 2, 2015 at 9:44 AM Hi Robert, I know you know what I'm saying:-)! Many thanks, my friend, for your lovely congratualtions and high rating! Have a wonderful day! Pandita

Laura Leiser July 30, 2015 at 2:23 PM This poem sounds scrumptious to me, Pandita! Congrats on your win :) Pandita Sietesantos July 31, 2015 at 6:51 PM Dear Laura, your lovely compliments warm my heart and shweeten my day!:-) Thank you so much for stopping by! Have an enjoyable weekend! Pandita

Carrie Richards July 30, 2015 at 10:26 AM This is as sweet as it can be...... love the line "saturated with an orange, bright summer day! " Like a wonderful Nehi orange soda.... it reminds me of my teenaged summers! Congrats to you! Pandita Sietesantos July 30, 2015 at 12:39 PM Hi Carrie, it is so good to hear from you and an honor to receive your wonderful comments and compliments. You helped to make my day brighter! Thank you so much! All the best. Pandita

Casarah Nance July 30, 2015 at 7:10 AM This was so sweet and perfect! Nicely done. Pandita Sietesantos July 30, 2015 at 7:27 AM Hi Casarah, thank you so very much for your high praises which mean a lot to me! All the very best to you! Pandita

Paul Callus July 30, 2015 at 4:35 AM Wow! This is exquisite, Pandita! This poem flows and tempts with suggestive imagery. It is tastefully rich and sweet, offering sensual delights. A fav and a 7rating. ~ Congrats on a merited win. // paul Pandita Sietesantos July 30, 2015 at 7:31 AM Hi Paul, you're so sweet for leaving me your lovely compliments and congratulations! Thank you so much for your high rating, kind encouraging words, and support! Have a shweet day! Pandita

Skat A July 30, 2015 at 3:34 AM amazing win Pandita Sietesantos July 30, 2015 at 7:29 AM Hi SKAT, I so appreciate your lovely congratulations! That's so shweet! Thank you very much! Pandita

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