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"love's Immortal Souls" (End Line Word)

First blown into the nostrils of....MAN, love’s intentional manifest.........BECAME, the sacred core of men's........... ESSENCES,' the living being , the sacred.......IMMORTAL, surrogate of Source, a living.......SOUL! Glorious grace manifest......AFTERWARDS, by heavenly angels............SOUGHT, in essence of heart........... SPIRITUALLY, for it is immortality.......... WRITTEN, in earthen clay are........... THEY, immortal beings, for they....ARE, and they shall be called......GODS! 2-9-10

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Date: 3/2/2010 1:24:00 PM
Manifest destiny! Congrad's to YOU! Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2010 1:14:00 PM
Hey, John, Congratulations on your win in the contest....I've asked Audrey to post these comments for me. ....Jimmy
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest John. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 8:41:00 AM
Dear Moses, Sincere Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in Dane Ann's First Ever " End Line Word " Contest YOU show POETS the True Essence of this Form Excellently done Thank-YOU for YOUR Support and Participation in Dane and My attempt to Create this New Form of POETRY and YOUR Many Gracious Comments and Wisdom YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:30:00 AM
This is the very essence of literary works, very unique, John. My congratulations on your win. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/1/2010 9:43:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, Moses. And thank you for your kind compliments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/1/2010 8:29:00 PM
John, Please accept my warm congratulations on your win in the contest! A worthy entry indeed! I thank you for taking the time to read my poem and leave those comments for me, especially when time can be so limited!! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/1/2010 7:55:00 PM
congrats! great write and deserving placement!
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:48:00 PM
Congratulations Moses, for your success in my contest! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...beautiful poem...Marty
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:03:00 PM
Congrats Moses on your winning poem and placement in the first ever End Line Word contest.. a wonderful win ..a magnificent write ..from your gifted pen .. thankxxx for your blog comment and also for the many beautiful comments on my poetry ...my son is leaving at 9 p.m. EST to begin his tour of military duty tonight as my blog today states.. appreciate your thoughts.. and blessings.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/1/2010 2:38:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem, Moses! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2010 4:06:00 PM
Dear James, I just said that because I don't like Writting " Dear John " letters. How are YOU this Evening I'm doing a List of all " End Line Word " Form POEMS Dane is going to send it to Management of the Soup I'm Asking if it's Ok to put this Magical Masterpiece on that list and any of YOUR New 'End Line Word " Poems This POEM is " End Line Word " Dane and I Appreciate YOUR Support and Participation in Our Endeavor To Create this New Form of POETRY Thank-YOU for YOUR GRACIOUS COMMENTS...HG
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Date: 2/18/2010 12:39:00 PM
Interesting, John I think you are saying here that as God is, man may become? It's a tenant of my religion. By the way, what did you mean when you said that thing about my number 11 sometime coming in handy?? Luv ya, andrea ps. oh, and good luck in this end line contest!
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Date: 2/17/2010 6:01:00 PM
Amazing poem you have here. the essence of the heart. the essence of the soul. i love your poem. & thank you so much for your kind comment -Always Lynette
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Date: 2/17/2010 12:22:00 PM
understanding of heavenly knowledge is unclear now, one day we will have better knowledge.... can't wait.
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Date: 2/16/2010 1:23:00 PM
Hi John A unique style with a poignant message of affirmation and Faith. Well written and a piece that should be a household quote to start each day attracting Heavens Blessings. Thanks for a great review as well Love Cookie
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Date: 2/13/2010 3:24:00 PM
really good read, had to read it several times to get all the meaning. Your poems are quite deep. Did you win a contest? Ellen
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Date: 2/12/2010 7:26:00 PM
Great job Moses.. hope u enter it in Dane Ann's new contest End Line Word.. miss u much.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. heard u got some snow on the news tonight... we got 48 inches total in one week with more on the way for Sunday... Oh My LORD..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/12/2010 3:57:00 PM
Excellent end-line write. We shall become the sons and daughters of God, brothers and sisters to Jesus. We will be a kingdom of judges and priest. That will be great won't it. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/12/2010 12:31:00 PM
Hi Moses, You did it!!! Thank you for supporting our efforts with this "End Line Word" poem. Your Spirituality remains consistent across all forms. Love to you. Dane Ann (Have you seen the blogs and the contest yet?)
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Date: 2/11/2010 2:45:00 PM
Beautifully written as usual Moses. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2/10/2010 7:07:00 PM
Exceptional verse, John! I wish you good luck in the contest with this great write. Peace, Audrey P.S. Thank you for your comments on my poem, "What Is It That You See?"
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Date: 2/10/2010 1:02:00 PM
Luke 16:10 He that is faithful in that which is least is faithful also in much, he that is unjust in the least is unjust also in much 16:11 If therefore ye have not been faithful in the unrighteous mammom, who will commit to your trust the true riches? Matthew 6:24 You cannot serve God and mammon: material wealth or possessions especially as having a debasing influence. Thank you for your poem. Ellen
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Date: 2/9/2010 9:51:00 PM
Interesting composition Moses. I see many poets trying this form, perhaps I will too. You did real well with and your words are an inspiration. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, love, Caroline.
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