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Love's Beautiful Lawn

Wild grasses of my springtime heart unmown,
unruly, unrestrained, in silence grew.
Youth’s fierce infatuation madly blew
its untamed gales where tall, green blades had grown.
Fair birds of transient love have long since flown –
that tale’s dark thread unraveled. Segue to
the stunning, breathless moment I met you
and found the ageless love I’d never known.

As autumn yields to winter, hair recedes
brown-gray, and once-hard muscles dormant lie;
our fathomless love-light remains undimmed.
Spring’s passions redirected, naught impedes
love’s resolute commitment. You and I
adore our beautiful lawn, neatly trimmed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Somadas Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 3:34 AM
Filled with beautiful metaphors and ended with a beautifully trimmed lawn.. Great win John..
Watt Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Thank you, Jenish, for your kind words. I always enjoy seeing your avatar of the hand, pen, and paper! Warm regards, John
La France Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 6:10 PM
John, congratulation on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem and thank you for taking part _Constance
Watt Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 6:34 PM
Constance, this was my first time attempting a word prompt contest and I enjoyed it very much! Thank you for your hard work in sponsoring and judging ~ John
Mcconnell Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 3:43 PM
Nice one John, taking one's tale of love through its route it's taken making one ponder of its message. Have a blessed day, Gordon
Watt Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 11:50 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Gordon. I thought I replied to this several day ago, I guess there was a glitch? Anyway, have a great day today ~ John
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February 25, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Thanks for sharing this, poetically expressed and picturesquely exposed. Thanks likewise for your comments. I appreciate them. God bless you.
Watt Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 7:12 PM
Beata, your heartwarming comments are always appreciated. Grace and peace in Christ ~ John
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February 23, 2020 at 3:25 PM
Lovely write, John, perfect for the contest. Eve
Watt Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:42 PM
Eve, thanks for your kind comment. I love your "weightlessness" sonnet for the contest ~ John
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February 22, 2020 at 8:43 AM
Beautiful description of love through the years. Well done my friend. I enjoyed this very much.
Watt Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 12:56 PM
Mark, I appreciate your words very much. Thank you for your encouraging support ~ John
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February 21, 2020 at 6:39 PM
wow, you truly WERE inspired, John. it's not exactly like, but in some ways, it's like a sonnet of mine based on a metaphor using birds to signify my youth. If I think of that title, I'll let you know. Love this. A fave!
Watt Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 8:26 PM
Yes, let me know if you think of it. I'm honored by the fave and wonderful comment, thank you!
Faulkner Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 4:25 PM
I love Italian sonnets, but haven't written one in a long time - your metaphors flow so seamlessly, weaves a richly detailed love story - best of luck in the contest, John!
Watt Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 4:44 PM
Michelle, I find Italian sonnets harder than English because of the more restrictive rhyme scheme, but still it's a good feeling when you can make it work. Hope you can do another one sometime - I'd love to read it. Thanks for the great feedback! ~ John
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February 21, 2020 at 9:45 AM
I enjoyed this beautiful poem John :)
Watt Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 11:23 AM
Heidi, I appreciate your very thoughtful comment ~ John
Pandit Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Didn't realize until the end you were using the given words--well written sonnet--in a wonderful tone. All the best, John.
Watt Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 11:23 AM
Thank you Vijay for the read and kind words. All the best to you today ~ John
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