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I will unfold a story of a sad lover's quarrel. It had snowed all through the night and was bitter cold- We were in bed soft as nesting doves- His kisses beautiful and gentle as a flower. Then- "TIME TO GET UP!" (he announced) and he jumped out of bed to get ready for his job in the city- I sat up sleepy and looked outside- It was a sea of pure white snow and still falling! I followed him and said, "DON'T GO (please darling!)' He told me I was silly and to go back to bed- and some awful, hurtful words followed: (from both of us) Words are weapons on the soul that never fade. He slammed the door! (when he left) I hung my head in sadness and went back to sleep. And my dreams of him sailed across a blue sky and the drum of time rolled. I was sorry for the mean words and would kiss them away- But, a fatal message winged its way to me- A loud knock on the door! We regret to inform you- Now, my life is weather-stained with tears and my dreams are lost- In the vastness of cold snow-draped headstones: until I stand at his weeping! ______________________________ March 2, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/Love's Altercation Copyright Protected, ID 17- 881-274-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym Written for the Lover's Quarrel Contest sponsor, Lewis Raynes First Place

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Date: 3/18/2017 9:03:00 AM
I see why this did so well. Wow! So many thoughtless emotions we share not knowing they will come to define our lives. Been there.
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Date: 3/16/2017 9:42:00 AM
Painful but beautiful,Broken,Congrats!
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Date: 3/14/2017 6:16:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Constance!
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Date: 3/14/2017 9:07:00 AM
Congrats on your placement BW. A message we should all heed.
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Date: 3/13/2017 10:01:00 PM
To much tragedy, to much torment. Well done and congratulations...
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Date: 3/2/2017 4:54:00 PM
A gorgeous sorrowful mini epic of love and loss. Good luck in the contest xomo (aside, is that a Junco with the House Finch?)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 6:49:00 PM
Maureen thank you for the gorgeous, yes I believe you are correct about the birds !
Date: 3/2/2017 12:47:00 PM
A poetic verse with a lesson we should all heed..because you never know what the future holds...well done and good luck in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 6:51:00 PM
Frederic, thanks for visiting and you are so right about last words. . They are sometimes forever!
Date: 3/2/2017 11:41:00 AM
Beautifully crafted. A 7, no doubt. Best wishes in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 6:52:00 PM
Thank you for the beautiful and 7!

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