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Love's Allure

I always weep for you in the hush of eventide hills. In their mystical muteness I can hear your heartbeats. As tears indulge in indigo dusky deepening horizons, I put my hope in the last morning star which lusters upon waves with sapphire iridescence shades of eternity, flowing upon seashell shores stroking your sacred footprints. Ever since your opulent hypnotic essence stole the innocence of my lucent purity, you've left me drunk on the wine of passion. I'm stumbling like a drunkard in the dappled depth of desire, with my provocative facade forming into a bodacious flame, searching for my poetic pearl lost in a sea of mauve enchantment. Wailing winds have discoloured my eyes with stained illusions, in their darkness, I yearn for your sunlit glimmer to reappear. I've been kissing the emptiness of porcelain moonlight, since you left behind the taste of your fragrant lullaby. Wondering if my kiss illuminated the ebony entities, veiled inside your mystique of midnight eyes. Visions of your majestic scarlet seraphim lips, poised in sultry pulsation, forever flutter, floating like blended opal and onyx butterflies. Their tender beauteous softness merging like ambrosia echoes of a cocoon, composing the sweetness of saccharine symphonies, caressing my soul like a magnolia breeze. Oh my beloved ethereal lover, will I be forever dreaming of your paradisiacal grace, seeking your celestial scent from dusk till dawn? Won't you gift me one shimmery glimpse of your rialto rosette silhouette. Forever wrap me in the sanctuary of your satin wings, like the warm merino shawl of love's allure. Why leave me in this state of silent saudade, where I hunger for the silken hymn of your tongue. Why bless me with such treasures, only to deprive me? The Silent One 27 December 2022

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Date: 9/24/2023 5:44:00 AM
I adore this poem. It is so passionate and poetically provocative. Alliteration and effortless word choice are only two tools on your brillant buffet of sensuality and sounds. Searching for my poetic pearl lost in a sea of enchantment. Your words paint passion longing and loss and make it melodic. Bravo!
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Date: 9/24/2023 6:48:00 AM
Thank you..Appreciate your feedback
Date: 9/16/2023 4:09:00 PM
Well-written, S.O. I like it when a poet uses alliteration in their poetry as you did. Deep passionate love that didn't end well. I had a few of those in my teen years. lol Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. Write On! my friend. Bill
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Date: 8/28/2023 11:02:00 AM
This is a sad yet beautiful wonderful write, very romantic indeed… Belle
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Date: 8/17/2023 7:08:00 AM
My good friend, another stellar production from your golden pen. A true pleasure to read this fine morning. You have not lost that golden poetry touch of yours!! A fav and a true gem this is. God bless. Welcome back..
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Date: 8/7/2023 3:52:00 PM
A wonderful, romantic write... I like the way you ended the poem with a question... I do hope you have found the answer you seek :)
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Date: 8/2/2023 2:11:00 PM
Very nice poem!
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Date: 5/31/2023 6:24:00 AM
Wooooh what an alluring, engaging poem, i admired so many terms and lines in this esp the veiled line, saudade, seashell lines and more. Kudos for this appealing muse rich in poetic vocab!! No wonder you're the popular poet here! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 5/17/2023 4:19:00 PM
SO, I always worry when we don't hear from you, and hope you're doing well.
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Date: 4/9/2023 6:57:00 PM
I was carried away by your enchanting words SO. So rich and fragrant and magical with the angst and yearning and taste of passion so brilliantly brought to life by you . Amazing . Susan :)
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Date: 4/1/2023 12:05:00 AM
Hi SO, hope you are doing well:)
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Date: 2/1/2023 7:21:00 AM
Breathtakingly stunning, SO:)
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Date: 1/23/2023 1:14:00 AM
Beautiful as always Silent One, exquisite is your amazing pen.
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Date: 1/17/2023 10:16:00 PM
Your poems are so personable and engaging.
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Date: 1/17/2023 3:43:00 AM
Every word, every line, every emotion, all to be pondered. Exquisite and heartfelt.
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Date: 1/3/2023 8:10:00 PM
Happy New Year! Beauitiful words chosen for this beautiful, longing, poem. You always have such a way with stirring longing and desire in your works!
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Date: 1/2/2023 11:51:00 AM
- Beautiful writing as always, S.O. :) - I wish you a peaceful and lovely new year :) - hugs
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Date: 1/2/2023 7:32:00 AM
Silent one, your emotions run deep and ability of poetic expression is peerless!! A very happy New Year to you !!!
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Date: 1/1/2023 7:35:00 AM
Beautifully written. Brilliant, my friend. Happy New Year! :)
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Date: 12/30/2022 9:27:00 PM
Such sumptuous words enveloped within your passionate poem, Silent! I’ve missed reading your magnificent poetry! Thank you for gifting us with your lovely words! :)
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Date: 12/29/2022 4:18:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas and prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Date: 12/28/2022 11:38:00 AM
Wow another awesome write that took me on a descriptive wishful romantic journey. love phyl
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Date: 12/28/2022 10:57:00 AM
Love's allure "vieled inside the mystique of her midnight eyes", Great write Silent
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Date: 12/28/2022 8:54:00 AM
POTD and deservedly so. Your poems are all awesome SO. I do know that you are worthy of praise, for you are a poet of note, but also know that you would prefer us to just comment for instance great write or wonderful write and give our thoughts on the poem. Well it is through and through romantic and magnifique! Be well SO, God Bless. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/28/2022 1:55:00 AM
What a beautiful romantic write S1, line by line gently flowing like a river that soothes the reader's mind... sparkling with rays of so many poetic devices especially alliteration... Glad to see you posting poems... I will try to find time to write more... Wishing you a very happy New Year my friend... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 12/27/2022 6:18:00 PM
An awesome alliterative amalgamation as always, S1. So many imagines unfolding across this poetic landscape. Best blessings for 2023. ;o]
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