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VOICE: Ahmad Razvi

Collaboration with White Wolf I’ll think of a place that’s far away, In my mind I shall escape, In colours and shapes with nothing to say, From a land that has no fate. Swirling images that make no sense, Happy to fly amongst the scenes, In a world you may say is full of nonsense, This quiet world knows no screams. With only shapes, free forms of light In many different colours They swirl and whirl, in patterns bright Infinitely turning smaller 'Till they all fit inside your brain A world inverted yet vast Where peace lives, free from pain Where future's also past But between the two we shall both meet, As though it were our quest in life, I the stem, you the flower so sweet, Neither shall be seen by the knife. We’ll hold each other until the end, For that is the way that lovers do, In my heart I do send, And shall always be in love with you. *** January 20, White Wolf Darren White

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Date: 1/20/2017 8:01:00 PM
All I can say is that I LOVE the poems you guys write together - One more perfect collaboration - <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 12:19:00 AM
We like writing together, a lot!
Date: 1/20/2017 1:13:00 PM
I love the romance and the imagery in your collaboration. Sigh :) <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 12:18:00 AM
Yeah, we're two big romantics lol :D
Date: 1/20/2017 10:14:00 AM
I love the imagery of the flower and the line..A world inverted yet vast Where peace lives, free from pain..terrific collab
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 11:10:00 AM
Yes, exactly what we tried to tell. Rick's flower and stem are beautiful, aren't they?
Date: 1/20/2017 7:16:00 AM
Another beautiful poetic duet from two amazing poets. Bravo Darren and Rick
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Chris :) We loved doing this romantic poem together very much.
Date: 1/20/2017 4:02:00 AM
Well done lads, a love story made in heaven.
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 4:07:00 AM
Yeah, it is. I like it a lot!
Date: 1/20/2017 2:40:00 AM
Well, that is one of the quickest I've ever done! We just had the click! Thanks for doing this with me, Duir! /|\
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 2:44:00 AM
Absolutely loved it :) Thanks Budgie!

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