Lovers Memory Lane

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Where've I been in time? Seems I've passed this way before. I remember you. Do you remember me? Life can be strange; Like entering the same old spaces, only using different doors! But, meeting prior isn't possible, unless time was rearranged. I remember you. Do you remember me? Life can be strange! Both mysterious and perplexing, what my heart is telling me; But, meeting prior isn't possible, unless time was rearranged, Offering on the spur of a moment, a seeming double destiny. Both mysterious and perplexing, what my heart is telling me. Why do I have these memories, of people, places and things, Offering on the spur of a moment, a seeming double destiny? Like riding a ripple upon the wave, which golden time brings. Why do I have these memories, of people, places and things, Like entering the same old spaces, only using different doors? Like riding a ripple upon the wave, which golden time brings? Where've I been in time? Seems I've passed this way before. Written on 2/13/2023 For: Deja vu Poetry Contest Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/6/2023 2:39:00 PM

Evelyn, congratulations on your win! The pantoum is the perfect poetic form with its repeating lines! Your imagery, "entering the same old spaces yet using different doors" is glorious! Your poetic prowess just shines in every stanza! And, of course, I love "golden time!" A poem just wouldn't be an Evelyn Buehler without the blessings of colors! Blessings and a hug my friend!!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/6/2023 5:11:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely remarks, dear friend. Your pleasure in this poem is cause for joy. Blessings and a hug for you, as well. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/16/2023 11:47:00 AM

A creative write/picture. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/16/2023 7:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paula.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/14/2023 8:38:00 AM

I find this quite appealing, Evelyn. That sense of having encountered it before is well depicted. Excellent verse. Best for a win

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/14/2023 10:51:00 AM

Your words are so appreciated. Have a nice day.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/14/2023 2:35:00 AM

You captured the feeling of something already seen. Lovely poetry.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/14/2023 10:50:00 AM

Thank you very much for the smile your words bring.

J. Summers

Date: 2/13/2023 5:51:00 PM

I like this a lot Evelyn. I especially liked the line, “Like entering the same old spaces, only using different doors?” Good luck in the contest. John

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/13/2023 7:36:00 PM

Thank you very much for your kind words and well wishes, John. Have a nice evening. :)