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Lovers' Call

Lovers' Call


I, am made of glass
you are exquisite marble
come, please shatter me

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

February 11, 2012 at 7:10 AM

Congrats Robin on this "sharp" senryu being featured. Vince

Robert Pettit

February 11, 2012 at 5:26 AM

Congratulations on having this work featured. Good senryu.

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 10, 2012 at 6:35 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved feature Robin. Love, Carol

Joseph Burchett

February 8, 2012 at 9:57 AM

Very true in life.

Daver Austin

February 8, 2012 at 8:50 AM

You want her to fall off her perch - Freudian. I like this poem mucho. Congrats on the selection. daver

Samual Ronthorpe

February 6, 2012 at 11:26 PM

Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup this week.................S.Ronthorpe

James Fraser

September 19, 2009 at 1:38 PM

Super Senyru Robin>>James

Christopher Higgins

January 15, 2009 at 5:24 AM

Beautiful write. Love exquisite marble and shatter me....sounds very explosive.

Raul Moreno

December 11, 2008 at 2:00 AM

You're knocking out the Senryu's too, I don't think there is a style you are not good at. I love them all...Raul

Ali Matheny

November 29, 2008 at 3:56 PM

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!! This IS exquisite!! ^.^ Love Alexz

Samantha Watts

November 29, 2008 at 12:13 PM

This so amazing! its short but it has such a deep meaning and it has instently became one of my favorite poems :). This is very nice, Robin. ~Sammy~

James Foulk

November 26, 2008 at 5:54 PM

what an idea for a poem, very clever. thank you for reading my kinfolk and for your comment and have a happy thanksgiving.

November 26, 2008 at 5:32 PM

So much said in just three lines. Interesting imagery carries your thoughts. I left a comment for you and others on my poem, "Dancing". I appreciate your encouragement. Keep on writing! Happy Thanksgiving! Karen