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Lovemaking On Air Balloon

Locked lips exploring tongues you and me among the clouds. Boundless ride timeless love is this the Heaven? ================ Placement: 11th ;(January 2011) Contest: Air Balloon Ride Sponsor : S K A T * By:kashinath karmakar(7th Dec.2010)

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Anula Aboobacker

Date: 5/5/2012 2:54:00 AM

lovely! congrats dear poet :)

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 5/4/2012 9:43:00 PM

A poignant and most enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on being featured.

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 5/1/2012 8:38:00 AM

Wonderful work and congrats on feature....Patrick

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/1/2012 6:01:00 AM

love this featured poem of yours Kash. harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 4:09:00 AM

Congratulations Kashinath on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/11/2011 9:28:00 AM

Hello Kashinath, Congratulations in the contest I love this poem it is just beautiful and touching. Have a wonderful New Year! As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2011 6:11:00 PM

Kashinath, ,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/10/2011 2:59:00 PM

WOW that is heaven in my eyes!!!! Excellent work my dear poet friend...

James Fraser

Date: 1/10/2011 1:03:00 PM

Love amidst the thermals. Not everyone's been in this position. Sensuous Haiku Kashinath. Many congrats on your win in Skat's contest....:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2011 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this passionate work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/10/2011 7:47:00 AM

Congratulations onn this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, Kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 7:24:00 AM

Kashinath, congratulations on being in the winners' circle. I really like this one. lUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/10/2011 3:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest Kashinath ;-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/10/2011 12:17:00 AM

fantastic write.. more, more and congrats in your big win in the contest, kasinath..: nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/9/2011 11:56:00 PM

Congrats Kashinath my friend on your super success in the Hot Air Balloon contest with this wonderful entry and magical ride to share.. enjoy your victory tonight with luv..

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2011 10:29:00 PM

Kashinath Karmakar, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUR WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~(( THIS POEM WAS AWESOME BUT, IT DOES NOT FALL UNDER HAIKU..)) ~SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2010 3:47:00 PM

this is wonderful , Kashinath. I am just wondering about the haiku form. Just my opinion, but if it were three lines 5/7/5 maybe it would have a better chance to place in the contest? Good luck in the contest. The judge is sure to love your concept. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2010 11:48:00 AM

Oh my kinda poetry Kashinath and good luck in Irma's new contest.. my entry is "Hot LUV Air Balloon" cause LUV is my favorite subject.. enjoyed this ride immensely..with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2010 7:33:00 AM

Good one..I am sure that was a great trip..You presence at my work was very uplifting..Sara

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/10/2010 1:35:00 PM

Hello Kashinath, Ahhhh how romantic and beautiful this is..... Have a wonderful weekend Kashinath As Always, Shar

David Smalling

Date: 12/9/2010 5:00:00 AM

You are safe there, yes, I will just pray that no rain melt the clouds ... but even the sunshine of your poem will be a protector.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2010 5:30:00 AM

I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Kashinath. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/8/2010 3:22:00 AM

Will you please give once over to the form of haiku, Kashinath. It is a nice expression with great images.