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love you can paint all colors of the sky azure

faraway as it opens your eyes chocolate melts now
wide with awe of a diamond wonder shining gleams
only if your were here embracing life magic majestic

love to spoil and cook for you something so delicious
putting your feet up softly watching a real-heart movie 
sounds real my dream bride so beautiful and so real

as I looked into a candle as it flickers alone quietly
one light thinking dancing in thoughts all-together
night shades color the luster of a silver star winking

a small shadow pervades ever so blotting starlight
slightly as I hear you calling me as shades whisper
in our crowded corner thoughts of passionate love
 
distant faraway wonders breathless whispers calling
me toward simple things catching my breathing sighs
just throwing a few more turf on the fire right now

starting to heat up my frozen breaths icy steaming 
clouds misting as the sky clouds my breath true blue
sweet dreams princess sits regal crowning charming

with the angels filled within love flying without wings 
catch you in my dreams tonight until the sun kisses
your face and eyelids golden warm beautiful bright 

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem,
Copyright © All Rights Reserved (May 14, 2015)
(Unrhymed Tercet)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/21/2015 2:43:00 AM
The warmth of love certainly does chase away the cold... I enjoyed reading this beautiful and passionate write. Very nicely penned, Gary and Liam!
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Date: 5/15/2015 11:31:00 AM
- Dear friends Liam and Gary, what joy reading this really beautiful and romantic poem :) - It oozes of love, warmth and romance - Dreams and angels shining in the candle - I love these compositions... may inspire me to put together my very own "palette" of such a beautiful and colorful poems - A solid 7 and with great pleasure on my fav. list - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/15/2015 6:35:00 AM
A great Tercet write indeed Liam Mate, but I'm probably a tad bit biased here with my assessment. The diverse mixed imagery coupled with the obvious passion of love delivers a quite compelling message to the reader. Best Mate . . . and thanks for posting this. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 5/14/2015 7:13:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Gary!Another very beautiful romantic wonderful love poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam,and this time in collaboration with our very dear friend Gary.This is a very enchanting captivating piece.Just dazzling!Very beautifully written.The imagery is great and amazing.A very beautiful,romantic sweet dreamy and passionate love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.A true gem!I enjoyed it.A 7+++ to each!Your pens are truly mighty golden.Very awesome collaboration between you two!A very charming delightful sweet piece.I love it.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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