Love You

In my eyes i see you A beautiful rose you are You are my shining star I will never let you down I will never make you cry I will never tell you a lie No matter what i will hold you tight Never let you go away from my sight I will always be there for you I will catch you when you fall You are my heart you are my soul With you I stand tall without you I fall.

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Girisha Suneja

Date: 11/13/2013 7:27:00 AM

HI YOU HAVE a warm welcome to u hi this is really one of the best poems bt insteadly i also hope tht u will rock on this platform

Arden Gopela

Date: 11/11/2013 8:44:00 AM

This one's nice, Kush! Welcome to poetrysoup! All the best my souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

Skat A

Date: 11/8/2013 7:56:00 PM

Kush , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2013 4:38:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Kush ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/8/2013 3:01:00 PM

Kush, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@