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Love Without Hope From the Book and the Pen

As you left you stole my book
Before saying goodbye I stole your pen
I know in my book you hug my look
You know in your pen you come back again
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March 27, 2016

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Line Gauthier

December 1, 2017 at 6:16 PM

How romantic. Well done, Probir.

Osayande Osaghae

January 30, 2017 at 8:58 AM

It's sweet!

Probir Gupta

January 30, 2017 at 9:23 AM

Thank you ...

Surishiva Kumar

September 30, 2016 at 4:16 PM

The encapsulated meaning in four lines and the associated rhythmic sound makes the reading easy and enjoyable. No wonder it has own a prize. Congratulations. Yours Sincerely

Probir Gupta

October 1, 2016 at 6:08 AM

Thank you ... probir ...

Indiana Shaw

August 7, 2016 at 9:32 AM

Lovely words and a "Well" deserved win . . . : )

Probir Gupta

August 7, 2016 at 10:54 AM

Thank you ...

Poet Destroyer A

April 6, 2016 at 11:35 PM

Probir, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA

Probir Gupta

April 6, 2016 at 11:47 PM

Thanks with Love without hope LINDA....

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 2, 2016 at 12:38 AM

Congrats on great win with this lovely write Probir..

Probir Gupta

April 2, 2016 at 1:09 AM

Thanks Upma...

Sandra Haight

April 1, 2016 at 3:53 PM

Wonderful metaphors, Probir. I enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your placement. Sandra

Probir Gupta

April 2, 2016 at 1:10 AM

Thanks for enjoying the metaphors Sandra...

Sara Kendrick

April 1, 2016 at 8:37 AM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara I could see this one. By retaining something of the other person's an assurance of another meeting or this could just be metaphoric language for something else..

Probir Gupta

April 1, 2016 at 8:39 AM

Thank you so much for your kind appreciation of my simple poem with very plain words.

Hansteven Selfa

April 1, 2016 at 7:50 AM

This is so brilliant Probir! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS

Probir Gupta

April 1, 2016 at 8:34 AM

Thank you so much...

Timothy Hicks

March 31, 2016 at 11:52 PM

Reflective layers in your four lines, Probir. The book and the pen are both needed to complete the other ... without both, neither can function. A metaphor that sticks with you ... nicely done!

Probir Gupta

April 1, 2016 at 8:35 AM

Thank you for your kind appreciation...