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Love Without Hope From the Book and the Pen

As you left you stole my book Before saying goodbye I stole your pen I know in my book you hug my look You know in your pen you come back again ___________________________________________ March 27, 2016

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Date: 12/1/2017 6:16:00 PM
How romantic. Well done, Probir.
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Date: 1/30/2017 8:58:00 AM
It's sweet!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/30/2017 9:23:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/30/2016 4:16:00 PM
The encapsulated meaning in four lines and the associated rhythmic sound makes the reading easy and enjoyable. No wonder it has own a prize. Congratulations. Yours Sincerely
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/1/2016 6:08:00 AM
Thank you ... probir ...
Date: 8/7/2016 9:32:00 AM
Lovely words and a "Well" deserved win . . . : )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/7/2016 10:54:00 AM
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Date: 4/6/2016 11:35:00 PM
Probir, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA
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Date: 4/6/2016 11:47:00 PM
Thanks with Love without hope LINDA....
Date: 4/2/2016 12:38:00 AM
Congrats on great win with this lovely write Probir..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/2/2016 1:09:00 AM
Thanks Upma...
Date: 4/1/2016 3:53:00 PM
Wonderful metaphors, Probir. I enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your placement. Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/2/2016 1:10:00 AM
Thanks for enjoying the metaphors Sandra...
Date: 4/1/2016 8:37:00 AM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara I could see this one. By retaining something of the other person's an assurance of another meeting or this could just be metaphoric language for something else..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind appreciation of my simple poem with very plain words.
Date: 4/1/2016 7:50:00 AM
This is so brilliant Probir! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much...
Date: 3/31/2016 11:52:00 PM
Reflective layers in your four lines, Probir. The book and the pen are both needed to complete the other ... without both, neither can function. A metaphor that sticks with you ... nicely done!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2016 8:35:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation...
Date: 3/27/2016 12:36:00 PM
Like the sun...compact and full of light. Beautiful. J.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/27/2016 8:14:00 PM
Thank you J. I am honoured...
Date: 3/27/2016 10:00:00 AM
What wonderful underlying meaning, Probir. I could use a pen like that.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/27/2016 10:36:00 AM
Great ! And thanks Lin...

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