Love Will Triumph

A genteel couple of an era past -
there in the center of their parlor stand.
Their daughter sits nearby, eyes downward cast.
Her face displays a tinge of sadness, and
across the room, by an ornate fireplace,
a boy that I perceive to be her love
stands with uncertainty worn on his face.

To all who view the scene, the topic of 
this painting seems quite clear: the household’s head
does not seem pleased. He’s glaring at the lad.
The wife is calming him from something said;
although the circumstance might be quite bad,
she softly speaks with one hand on his chest . . . 
and love will triumph, for good wives know best!


For the Charles Haigh Wood Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Babcock Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 4:16 PM
I can picture this as your describe it so well. nice one. love phyl
Zerbst Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 9:08 PM
Great beginning and ending, Andea, but the middle is decidedly outside of the painting, placing emphasis on the viewer rather than the subject in question. I hope you don't mind the criticism; I am just letting you know so hopefully you will do really good next time. You do have good rhymes here. Outside of the contest I am really fond of this sonnet. Especially that last little line ;)
Puddifoot Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 3:45 PM
congrats on your win, andrea, I remember commenting on this one before, I knew it would be on the winners' list! :)
May Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 6:40 AM
congrats on your win Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 2:05 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Deschler Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 9:12 PM
It is interesting how everyone in this contest viewed this painting, and interpreted it in their own unique way. This poem was very nicely written, Andrea, it has great flow and rhyme. Great work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind comments. They are much appreciated!
Adams Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 6:58 PM
we all viewed it and some had similarities but each created something different...nicely done Andrea...congrats on your win :)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 6:41 PM
Good wives most certainly do. Congratulations Andrea.
Seal Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 6:29 PM
Though it's way down the list lol for you Petal haha, I'll still offer my congratulations. Take care, Richard
Seal Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:14 PM
I haven't seen the picture Petal but I believe I know it intimately now, it reminds me of me lol. On more than one occasion haha. Kids !!!!!!!. Take care, Richard
Puddifoot Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 6:22 PM
a very nice sonnet here from the sonnet queen! I have yet to write something for this contest...and your punctuation is always IMMACULATE, andrea! ever since you blogged about it, it has kicked off something akin to OCD in me! I've been studying my punctuation book and realizing I'm quite shocking with some of it! haha no you didn't miss my birthday, it's imminent, but I'm not telling when! hehe
Deschler Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 2:20 PM
Very nicely done! This goes very well with the painting. I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest! I have also written a poem titled, "Love Will Triumph", for this contest. Please, read it sometime....Thank you for your kind comments. It means so much!
Gigno Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 2:15 PM
!!!
Horne Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 1:55 PM
perfect description of this pic, Andrea
Devnath  Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Really a beautiful poem. Such situation is seen in many cases in life. Nice observation. Good luck in the contest. Loved always my sweet friend, bl
Mcdaid Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 11:13 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITTING
Austin Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 10:24 AM
Yep! Pop is always worried about his daughter's boy friends. Love, daver
Mohammed Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 5:31 AM
Nicely done Andrea. I enjoyed perusing your poem this morning.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 11:15 PM
Dear Andrea, Silver words spring from your fingertips onto the page with glowing ease. Very lovely indeed, now I must go see the picture! I am sure this will be popular in the contest.
Johnson Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 3:56 PM
A gentile interpretation. A temperate hand can keep peace when all around are flailing. Peace. :) Good Luck in the contest Andrea.
Neels Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 7:30 AM
What a superb ending Andrea, I hope to see this gem on the winner's list :) luv Wilma
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 6:27 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your view or interperation of the painting..Sara
Cee Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 10:08 PM
http://elaiceezy.blogspot.com/2013/09/save-world-save-brighter-future.html hi Andrea, here's the link of my blog, my oratorical piece.. hope u can help me to improve this.---ELAI
Bauer Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 3:26 PM
beautifully done, without even seeing the painting! your rhyming here is quite brilliant. bravo to you, andrea!
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 3:09 PM
..... love the ending... well done Andrea. - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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