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Love Will Always Win

Surrendering innocence lust; acquiesces to sin. Fueling fledgling feelings; convinced love will always win. You revel in the pleasures inflated egos conceive. Yet, wooed by convincing lies, you find emotions deceive. And it hurts to play the dunce, watching your dreams fall apart. But it is not the first time sadness has broken your heart. Somewhere between frowns and smiles is a place where doubts take shape. There, they can drive you to tears, seeking a means of escape. Praying for help from above, you concede you've made mistakes. And yet, still longing for love, desire suddenly awakes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/12/2018 10:41:00 PM
Lovely poem about not giving up. Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:21:00 AM
Thanks Line, for all of your continued support. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2015 5:37:00 PM
i love the end part of this poem, great write, love is so great i tell u, beautiful poem emily, richard
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Date: 2/4/2015 7:04:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2015 11:30:00 AM
Beautifully written with an explicit craft shown as obvious as the scorching sun. Great piece, a wonderful share and a blessed read.
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Date: 2/4/2015 1:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, you've made me blush. Emile.
Date: 2/3/2015 2:13:00 PM
Nicely done; good direction.
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Date: 2/3/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Mark, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/2/2015 12:21:00 PM
I especially like the last line that includes the word hope..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/2/2015 12:34:00 PM
Thanks Sara, for your support. Emile.
Date: 2/2/2015 11:13:00 AM
I like how you ended this on a positive note, emile.. how beautiful and inspiring despite the sharp edge of indulgences.. huggs
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Date: 2/2/2015 12:08:00 PM
Hope is always positive in nature...thanks for your warm words. Emile.

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