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Love Was There and Still Prevails

Love* verily tied Dad and Mom as one Upholding steadfast commitment vow Sealed by “Till death do us part…” Such love surpassed romantic thrills We their children beheld with bliss Since they remained clinging to each other for decades Cleaving to love’s strength triumphantly. Surely their love built our home Exemplified with kindness’ care-share-give Asserting truth, respect, forgiveness… Still prevailing by the compassion of God That genuine love keeps on begetting loving families My soul along faith testifies with gratitude While I strive to live for its growth and fruition.
*1 John 4:18 There is no fear in love; but perfect love casteth out fear: because fear hath torment. He that feareth is not made perfect in love. November 2, 2022 2nd place, "Inspired by a song - Once There Was A Love" Poetry Writing Contest; Sponsored by JCB Brul; judged on 11/11/2022.

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Date: 11/3/2022 9:23:00 AM
Truly love does "beget" love for generations Beata. Lovely tribute to your mom and dad and to their legacy of steadfast love for all of your family. Love the use of the word "verily!" Nice touch linking us to words of Jesus in the Bible. Best wishes for the contest with your beautiful poem of faith! Blessings!
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Date: 11/2/2022 12:37:00 PM
you were lucky to have such a loving home. Mine was chaos with the step family issues but I still enjoyed my siblings!
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Date: 11/2/2022 5:05:00 AM
Parents leave the trail for children to follow. Their commitment to each other and their concern for their children build the foundation of a strong family. Their legacy will be continued through generations . Beata, you are lucky to have been blessed with such loving parents
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