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'love Unquestioned'

He 
Witness 
My sadness 
Tears rolling down
He wiped the tears away and held me close.
He never asked what brought them on, he just 
let me be me
and loved me
with my 
tears.. 


Contest: Anything Goes
14th Place

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2011 10:05:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma, on your well deserved win for your poem in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes". Love, Carol

M Nudelman

Date: 2/19/2011 4:09:00 PM

Absolutely fantastic!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/15/2011 11:53:00 AM

I'm so happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Wilma. Much deserved! Congratulations, dear friend. Love you, Carolyn

Elaine George

Date: 2/15/2011 1:47:00 AM

Hi wilma, Congrat's on your BIG WIN! With this fine poem. Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2011 8:15:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your success in Debbie's contest with this brilliant beauty my friend.. enjoy with luv and Happy Valentine's Day..

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/14/2011 8:11:00 PM

Good example of a tetractys poem. Congratulations on winning in Debbie's contest with this entry.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/14/2011 8:03:00 PM

Wow Wilma. Many congrats

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/14/2011 6:51:00 PM

Nice form. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Constance La France

Date: 2/11/2011 7:42:00 PM

oh my gosh, now I have tears, this is an amazing poem each word filled with emotion, wonderful, a fav for me too~~

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/11/2011 2:18:00 PM

Those lines just traveled across the pond and touched my heart in all kinds of ways..In my FAV. it goes.. Great poetry my dear...luv Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/11/2011 10:43:00 AM

That's the type of unconditional love we rarely find, Wilma. The way he held you so tenderly without asking questions is so moving. Surely, you could tell him why you are crying, but he is just offering support and letting you decide if you want to share it. You really have the teractys form down well and this is a beautiful poem. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2011 10:11:00 AM

Love it, Wilma. This is an interesting form you have used. I think I saw another one.LEt me go see if i have seen it before. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2011 6:09:00 AM

Tender moment Wilma my friend.. a touching emotional write with depth of two who know each other so well... enjoyed with luv.. appreciate your kudos on my Concerto... good luck if for any contest ...