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Love To Give

Something throttled up DEEP inside wiggles-waggles hurt crying imploded reach snaggles without sight back of the EYES 'Love Death' - One moment ecstasy next this stupid analysis like She? OH! SHE! Purrrfection! but then such birdlegs (Coo you idiot COO!) "I've so much love to give OH! BOO HOO!"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2010 10:47:00 PM

hmmm, very strange one for me. wiggle waggles makes me think of a puppy and the purrrrfection of a cat and the COO of a bird. Is this animal love. heehee. I can't believe I finally came upon a poem of yours I had not seen yet!! Luv, Andrea

James Faulkner

Date: 12/4/2008 11:20:00 AM

that was cool read

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/18/2008 1:30:00 PM

man is asleep/dead/staring into nothing, submersing himself in the illusion fully.d when one does not understand that man who does not know his true self is asleep and basically in prison, hope is pointless - leaving him cold. I hope this makes sense? I love that you aksed though, thanks you my friend, love Kristin :)

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/18/2008 1:26:00 PM

Hey there, Daver! I guess Brian thought I wrote this! lol I wanted to respond to your comment and explain (please don t feel bad about not understanding that poem, as you can see by the lack of comments, most did not get it!) lol Basically, it is, as most of my poetry is, thick with metaphor. The homeless man is an unenlightened man, being that he does not know his true self - his one I, he is but an empty house, with no master. All things become automatic then, without a master of the house...

Brian Strand

Date: 11/18/2008 2:18:00 AM

Like the presntation Kristin.Suits the words.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments & for the info.

James Foulk

Date: 11/17/2008 3:25:00 PM

a very cute piece you wrote here. brought a smile and made my day.

Michael Torres

Date: 11/17/2008 1:06:00 AM

This is excellent. Michael Torres

Ali Matheny

Date: 11/16/2008 5:18:00 PM

And I am a female

Ali Matheny

Date: 11/16/2008 5:17:00 PM

I am a 15 year old

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/16/2008 1:28:00 PM

Ok, it seems to be the bird legs that are cracking everyone up. I am sorry as I am sure there is so much more here, but I cannot read this without thinking of giving my dog a bath, as when he is wet we call him chicken legs. Forgive me Daver. : ) Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/16/2008 12:46:00 PM

You always surprise me with your wit and clever charms and knowledge. lol Excellent, bird legs, hee. You are always very fun to read, love Kristin :)

Date: 11/16/2008 10:14:00 AM

What a fun approach. Thanks for allowing me to chuckle. Visually interesting too. Nice job! Happy Writing! Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/16/2008 9:25:00 AM

You have such a clever and wit, and make us think beyond the usual! Fun and interesting write, Daver! ~ Carrie

Ali Matheny

Date: 11/16/2008 6:54:00 AM

VERY CUTE!!!! I love it!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/16/2008 6:54:00 AM

I love the lay-out of this piece..almost like a puzzle. Birdlegs? That is funny! BG