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Swap Quatrain
Created by Lorraine M. Kanter. Within the Swap Quatrain each stanza in the poem must be a quatrain (four lines) where the first line is reversed in the fourth line. In addition, line 2 must rhyme with line 1, and line 3 must rhyme with line 4 and so on, BUT not repeat the same rhyming pattern on subsequent stanzas. Rhyming pattern: AABB, CCDD, and so on. 

Love cannot exist without trust, as a precursor, it's a must. Strangers get easily dismissed, without trust, love cannot exist. One must be close, to break your heart, therefore love can tear it apart. When trust is lost, it hurts the most, to break your heart, one must be close. You were betrayed by one you loved, your closest friend, once beloved. After all of the facts got weighed, by one you loved, you were betrayed. Time cannot repair such a hurt, though it's a hurt hearts can't avert. To have known love that wasn't there, such a hurt, time cannot repair. (Swap Quatrain) 06/09/2020

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Date: 7/3/2020 1:46:00 PM
Once trust has gone its so difficult to regain it Emile, great example for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2020 1:56:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I always appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/12/2020 10:38:00 AM
This is a wonderous write. I truly love it and it's going into my faves. Bless you with many more wonderous words. Love to you, Gina
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/12/2020 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Gina, your comment is like a ray of sunshine my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/9/2020 6:07:00 PM
It's not easy to find the strength to trust again after being betrayed. This is so true and sadly a part of life. Thanks for sharing your wisdom, Emile. I love the flow and repetition of the form. It strengthens the emotion of the poem. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/10/2020 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Rhonda, I appreciate your in-depth comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/9/2020 6:06:00 PM
hello Emile Pinet, This poem has a strong message for those that do not trust. I like this poem .Will be my fav. Enjoy your evening my friedn.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/10/2020 11:21:00 AM
Emile you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/10/2020 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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