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When I look into your eyes,… … I journey into your soul discovering your inner being that I long to know; … I waltz with the sparkle in your eyes that makes me come alive; … we dance in harmony traveling through our psyches without disguises; ...upon the wind we travel the world of dreams to waterfalls gently caressing our bodies, to oceans and lands yearning for us to discover and understand; … we soar high into the clouds landing softly on warm beaches, endlessly playing, building sandcastles and whisking the sand between our toes; … we are living in a castle near the mountains; the blue in your eyes reflects the crisp, cool blue sky above as we approach it for the very first time; we open the door and the sparkle in your eyes reflects the purpose and pride of fulfilled hopes, dreams, and desires that you saw and helped us achieve; … we are encouraging, and compassionate to those around us because the security we have in our love allows us to be so without fear or loneliness; … I see the reflection of your love for me and mine for you. We are becoming one in heart, mind, and spirit yet unique and apart at the same time; … I see God works miracles every day, for our love is precious, a gift rare; … I see God and His love for you, his precious child; you're pleasing to Him; … I love you heart and soul, unconditionally; … I trust you; know where you lead I will go, for I am forever by your side.

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Date: 4/30/2024 10:47:00 AM
Beautiful love tribute. Only a few lucky ones have such loving life.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/30/2024 5:31:00 PM
thanks for your thoughtful words and visit, Jay. Yes, I consider myself lucky and fortunate. Hope you have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 4/30/2024 10:24:00 AM
I am happy for you to know a love like that. Very beautiful and profound words...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/30/2024 5:30:00 PM
awww, thank you Paige! I appreciate your kindness. Our love is rare, a miracle for both of us...and today is our 41st anniversary. Woot! Woot! thanks for stopping by, hugs, Sara
Date: 4/29/2024 1:07:00 PM
I thank your poetry scrapbook for the photo. You and Bill have a strong bond of love. I see it in your comments on each other's poetry, and the affectionate poetry you write for each other. Don't ever let that go. I'm in awe of your relationship... hugs to you both.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 6:28:00 PM
awww, thank you, Lin! I appreciate your kind words about my poem and about the both of us. We are so fortunate to have each other...no, we won't ever let the love go. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs Sara
Date: 4/29/2024 1:06:00 PM
Such a beautifully written love tribute,Sara. May the Good Lord continue to bless you both and keep you guys in this blissful place. Enjoy your day.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 6:27:00 PM
thank you! Your kind comments mean a great deal to me. Thanks for stopping by, too. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 4/29/2024 10:41:00 AM
What a great tribute to your love for both of you. May God shower you with blessings. Hugs to both.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 6:27:00 PM
thanks, Victor, for your shower of kind words :-) and for your blessings. Grateful for your presence here on PS. Have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 4/29/2024 9:42:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful in love, romance, and commitment, friend Sara. So very loyal and endearing. My very best wishes for the contest with such a worthy entry. A FAV. Blessings to you and Bill.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 6:26:00 PM
I so appreciate your visit and your kind words about my love poem. Humbly grateful for the fave and your support! Wishing you a blessed evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 4/29/2024 9:27:00 AM
Deep and sincere mutual love. A nice love story.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 6:25:00 PM
thank you, Jay. Grateful for your visit and positive comments. Have a lovely evening, Sara
Date: 4/29/2024 9:19:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful/lovely~story/write. Good memories are the best kind to have. Good Luck... Have a fun day writing away.....................
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 6:24:00 PM
thank you, Paula. I appreciate your kind and thoughtful comments. Hope you had a pleasant day. Wishing you a blessed evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 4/29/2024 7:59:00 AM
Your love for each other is rock solid Sara, you're so lucky to have each other. Beautifully written. Tom
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 6:24:00 PM
awww, thank you Tom! Yep, pretty rock solid...we are lucky to be with one another. I appreciate your visit and complimentary words, Sara
Date: 4/29/2024 7:33:00 AM
Dear Sara, What a breathtaking journey through love's many dimensions, from the depths of the soul to the heights of divine connection. I felt that each poetic line was a testament to the power of love to illuminate and transform our world. Such sincerity and passion for a love that is boundless and transcendent. Sara, what a beautiful ode to the transformative nature of love. - Blessings, Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 6:23:00 PM
thanks, Daniel, for your insightful words and thorough read of my poem. I'm grateful for your complimentary words. I look forward to reading your comments. Have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 4/29/2024 7:05:00 AM
Dear Sara, this is a beautiful poem about the bond between two people, the love they share, and the growth they experience as a unit. As they go through life's ups and downs, the focus is on the two characters' deepening spiritual and emotional connection. Your choice of words conveyed a range of feelings and ideas. Also, the use of metaphors like dancing, flying, journeying, and constructing show how deep the connection is. passionate and personal, evoking feelings of intimacy and bonding
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 6:22:00 PM
dear Sotto-I'm always so grateful for your visits and your in depth read and understanding of my poems. You truly understood the essence of what I was hoping to say...hard to capture love in just a few lines. Anyway, thanks for your positive comments. Have a blessed evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 4/29/2024 5:21:00 AM
So beautiful! Well done.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 6:21:00 PM
thank you, Jeanette. Grateful you stopped by; appreciate your visit and comments, hugs, Sara

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