Love Revolution

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Love Revolution begins and ends with Laotse's opening anthem of Book III, The Imitation of Tao. However, my word choices attempt a post-millennial transliteration of what I believe Laotse may have captured about Original Intent as deciphered through observation of natural systems. Lin Yutang's translation follows (p. 101, Modern Library, 1948, The Wisdom of Laotse).

14. Prehistoric Origins

Looked at, but cannot be seen--

    That is called the Invisible (yi)

Listened to, but cannot be heard--

    That is called the Inaudible (hsi).

Grasped at, but cannot be touched--

    That is called the Intangible (wei).

These three elude all our inquiries

And hence blend and become One.

Not by its rising, is there light,

Nor by its sinking, is there darkness.

    Unceasing, continuous,

    It cannot be defined,

And reverts again to the realm of nothingness.

That is why it is called the Form of the Formless,

The Image  of Nothingness.

That is why it is called the Elusive:

    Meet it and you do not see its face;

    Follow it and you do not see its back.

He who holds fast to the Tao of old

    In order to manage the affairs of Now

Is able to know the Primeval Beginnings

    Which are the continuity of Tao

The Revolution of Taoism

Within the evolving cultural womb of human nature's prehistoric original intent

Looked at, but cannot be seen--
EarthMother's creative heart-womb
is called panentheistically Invisible
omnipresent core Yintegrity. (yi)

Listened to, but cannot be heard--
SolarSystemGod's crowning language 
called omniscient
Inaudible Bicameral Octaves (hsi)

Grasped at, but cannot be touched--
EcoSoul is called omnipotent Intangible
metasystemic
polycultured 0-Zone 
sadred root Identity (wei)

This Holy Trinity eludes all our deductive research
To balance and comprehend Zero-soul ecologic 
and geo-economics.

Not solely by its positive rising, is there light
restorative justice
peaceful Truths
worthy of co-investment

Not solely by dark's negative sinking
grace evaporates non-polynomial dissonant chaos.
Squared c and e and p unceasingly balance positive and double-bind negative,
continuous rising and sinking wavilinear-nucleic,
Universal Intelligent Form cannot not become revolutionary
and appositionally
and analogically
and polyculturally redefined

Or reverts back again toward a cycle of humanistic autism
and personal confusion
and non-polynomial reverse-live 
degenerative chaos.

That is why RNA is called the form of EchoMe
The Reverse Image of Black Hole Nothing Negentropy:
    Gravitate toward permacultural function
    and we comprehend EarthMother's womb-face
    mutual mentoring love and peace
Follow gravity's synergetic love
and you understand Cooperative Logistics 
in reverse of Competitive entropic Lose-Lose norms.

We recycle and repurpose holonic Echo-Ecos of Earth
looking and listening back
out
in
at EcoSelf's humanely,
culturally,
historically speciating identity
longing to return
from where we have never left,
although the road of return emerges 
through our dissonant fog of confusion.

Each bicamerolling lens,
informating 
incarnating 
karmic string-chi entity
of DNA revolving back through generations of rebirth
toward this self-fulfilling moment

Stretching back to Original Primal Relationship
of sapiens branching off our ecotherapeutic
polycultural Tree-Systems of Bicameral/CoBinary Life,
absorbing DNA's refracting light sap
waving and weaving back through spacetime's
polynomial plasmatic Yin-fold

Golden Ratioed and Ruled 
(0)-sum Win-Win ecologic Codex,
grace-fields of regenerating economic Commons prehension

Organic vocational farms yielding optimal form 
and health functional harvest,
becoming our Earth-bound
global Beloved EarthTribe Community,
within each heart and compassioning mind
full of nutrient Earth's Universal Intelligently Inductive In-Formation.

Each death of willfulness
a redemptive pledge of willingness to share
each breath,
life,
Earth's mutually coincident ecotherapy.

Holding fast to Permacultural Tao
    To optimally ecologize affairs of spacetime
Able to comprehend Primal Original Relationships
    Which form interdependent chi-systemic Tao.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/20/2015 9:43:00 AM
Great thought well expressed via the professionalism of a poet. You definitely have it in you and I am glad I came across this one. A commanding 7 here.
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Date: 5/20/2015 9:59:00 AM
Thanks again. I so appreciate your comments and even wonder if we would both benefit by working on something together.
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