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Love Proposed

He sat beside her in the park bench, On a beautiful balmy morning, Breezy and pleasant after a drizzle; Birds came out of their temporary shelters, And chirped and chattered and whistled. A pair of butterflies in a tree nearby, Fluttered their pink and purple wings in joy, And danced around each other: a moment So perfect, he assumed, to propose to her! She sat gazing at the distant gulmohar, He took her hand mustering courage To face her bold and beautiful face; Then he muttered, stuttered, and finally uttered: "Will you be with me forever?!" 09-29-2020 'MAX 14 lines Poem-Inspired Prompt' Contest by Line Gauthier Second Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2021 4:43:00 PM

If you were able to read all my poems and comment, I'd have to give you a hundred dollars. hahaha. Well, for ME, these are your old poems because they are at the bottom of your list. I will try to find another I have not read and I eagerly await your TRINET

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/9/2021 2:45:00 AM

Haha..I know..yours is a vast OCEAN of creativity from your magical ink..Thank you Andrea for being patient enough to read my muses. I have posted my Trinet actually, though not so confident about it......hugs ~ Ani

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2020 12:37:00 PM

this is SO cute, and I see it won with Line's contest. BIG belated congrats!! I am just working my way up from the bottom of when you started writing and posting here. Are these ALL your poems posted at Soup or do you have many not shown yet? When I came here in 2010, I had many poems that I slowly posted over time but now I think almost all my poetry is up here except for a few odds and ends and since 2015 almost all my poetry is fresh!

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/6/2021 10:10:00 AM

Oh my... Thank you so much Andrea... just now saw this comment of yours... Haha reading all my old poems?... thank you Andrea. These are my ONLY poems posted in Soup. Oh is it? You came here in 2010...? Wow... so many poems of yours am yet to read..I think it will take my life time if I start reading your poems one by one... Lol... you have so MANY posted here, will read them... SURE.. .. Hugs :)

Rohit Sharma

Date: 12/14/2020 12:14:00 AM

SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN.....????????

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/14/2020 9:36:00 AM

Thank you Rohit.. :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/13/2020 8:45:00 PM

LOVELY. Congrats Anta to win. Blessing.

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/14/2020 4:48:00 AM

Thank you so much for your valuable comment... Love and hugs.... :)

John Gondolf

Date: 10/3/2020 4:40:00 AM

I like the beautiful imagery I this sweet romantic poem, Ani, nicely done. Best of luck in the contest. John

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/3/2020 8:43:00 AM

Thank you for your valuable comment John :) Ani

John Watt

Date: 9/29/2020 11:13:00 AM

I love how you described the delicate aspects of nature in preparation for his proposal. "Muttered, stuttered, and finally uttered" so perfectly captures his nerves and the love that finally overcomes them. Best wishes in the contest, Anitha.

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/29/2020 11:55:00 PM

Thank you soo much for your valuable comment John!! Best wishes and a cheerful day to you :)