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Love Poem

It started with your eyes, you, like a cat, disinterested, passing the time of day, oblivious to mindless idle chat such nonchalance, until you looked my way, It started with a smile, a subtle link to bridge the gap , a letter of intent to say you'd read my mind and what I think reading my lips for what I truly meant. It started with a laugh like dawn birdsong, or streams whose water giggles over rocks, head tilted back, but knowing all along who had control, you stalked me like a Fox. It started with that kiss, hands tightly clasped in case the force of it tore us apart or fear that maybe it would be our last instead of as we hoped just be the start. It started many, many years ago unlike jigsaw pieces not meant to fit, we do, and through the years I think we know when all is said and done, you started it. February 20th 2018 For contest 'Love poem', sponsor Laura Loo

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Date: 2/25/2018 7:18:00 PM
Gobsmacked by how good this is at describing the chemistry. Congratulations Viv.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/25/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thanks, Jean x
Date: 2/24/2018 5:18:00 PM
Back with congrats, Viv. Most deserving win.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/24/2018 8:04:00 PM
Thanks Line, very kind x
Date: 2/23/2018 10:21:00 AM
oh dear Viv, beautifully expressed as always, great poem thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/24/2018 1:29:00 AM
Thanks, Laura, very kind. And you have great taste :)
Date: 2/21/2018 6:39:00 PM
I like the lightness of this love poem - it's romantic without being sentimental. Very enjoyable, Viv - good luck in the contest.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/21/2018 7:36:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes, sort of a soft sweet with a hard centre. Viv x
Date: 2/20/2018 10:19:00 PM
Awe, this love poem is so coy and sweet at the same time, Viv! Loved it! Good luck in the contest :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/21/2018 1:44:00 AM
Thanks, Laura, glad you liked it. I don't normally do gooey. Viv x
Date: 2/20/2018 9:37:00 PM
Viv! This is so awesomely written! I especially love that kindergarten teasing last line..."You started it!" Romantic and humorous both. Expertly penned.
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/21/2018 10:20:00 PM
Now the popular line is "bring it". I use that one with my daughter. LOL.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/21/2018 1:45:00 AM
Yes, Rhoda, my daughter used to use that phrase as a kid, and my reply was always " yeah, and I'll finish it!!!". Viv x
Date: 2/20/2018 7:43:00 PM
She started it. That is a delightful tease of a poem and it sounds like it might be an inside joke. An adorable jab. Bravo, Viv. Love it.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/21/2018 1:46:00 AM
Thanks Line, not so much an inside joke, I was just passing the blame :)
Date: 2/20/2018 2:08:00 PM
- A delicious love poem, Viv - Long live the love :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/21/2018 1:46:00 AM
Taak, Anne-Lise, happy you liked it. Viv x
Date: 2/20/2018 11:37:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem that flows with rhythm like a song. Simple words glowing with romance..I found the repeat first line in every stanza quite appealing. A winning entry, Viv.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/21/2018 1:47:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay, yes, the repetition is an effective instrument sometimes. Regards, Viv
Date: 2/20/2018 10:07:00 AM
As long as we know who started it, right? That last line took me from the romantic bubble and into giggles. This is a lovely, witty and enjoyable poem that comes complete with a grin that I could feel. 4th Stanza - I think you want tore instead of tear? What do I know, here I risk starting something when all I meant to do is say I enjoyed your talent these last few minutes! All the best ... CayCay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/20/2018 10:22:00 AM
Thanks, CayCay, you're right, as usual. Where would I be without you? Viv x
Date: 2/20/2018 9:49:00 AM
Hi Viv, that's so romantic, I had to read it over and over again, because it was so enchanting. :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/20/2018 10:22:00 AM
Thanks, Tahira, you're very kind. Glad you liked it. Viv x
Date: 2/20/2018 9:12:00 AM
now that is a romantic poem nice to see your romantic side...
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/22/2018 7:22:00 PM
Yes, Silent, I have occasional bouts of gooey. Thanks for dropping by. Regards viv

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