Love Poem

It started with your eyes, you, like a cat,
disinterested, passing the time of day,
oblivious to mindless idle chat
such nonchalance, until you looked my way,

It started with a smile, a subtle link
to bridge the gap , a letter of intent
to say you'd read my mind and what I think
reading my lips for what I truly meant. 

It started with a laugh like dawn birdsong,
or streams whose water giggles over rocks,
head tilted back, but knowing all along
who had control, you stalked me like a Fox.

It started with that kiss, hands tightly clasped
in case the force of it tore us apart
or fear that maybe it would be our last
instead of as we hoped just be the start.

It started many, many years ago
unlike jigsaw pieces not meant to fit,
we do, and through the years I think we know
when all is said and done, you started it.

February 20th 2018
For contest 'Love poem', sponsor Laura Loo
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Murray Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 7:18 PM
Gobsmacked by how good this is at describing the chemistry. Congratulations Viv.
Wigley Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Thanks, Jean x
Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Back with congrats, Viv. Most deserving win.
Wigley Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 8:04 PM
Thanks Line, very kind x
Scars Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:21 AM
oh dear Viv, beautifully expressed as always, great poem thank you and congrats :) -luloo
Wigley Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 1:29 AM
Thanks, Laura, very kind. And you have great taste :)
Krampe Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 6:39 PM
I like the lightness of this love poem - it's romantic without being sentimental. Very enjoyable, Viv - good luck in the contest.
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Thanks, Agnes, sort of a soft sweet with a hard centre. Viv x
Leiser Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 10:19 PM
Awe, this love poem is so coy and sweet at the same time, Viv! Loved it! Good luck in the contest :)
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:44 AM
Thanks, Laura, glad you liked it. I don't normally do gooey. Viv x
Tripp Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:37 PM
Viv! This is so awesomely written! I especially love that kindergarten teasing last line..."You started it!" Romantic and humorous both. Expertly penned.
Tripp Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Now the popular line is "bring it". I use that one with my daughter. LOL.
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:45 AM
Yes, Rhoda, my daughter used to use that phrase as a kid, and my reply was always " yeah, and I'll finish it!!!". Viv x
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:43 PM
She started it. That is a delightful tease of a poem and it sounds like it might be an inside joke. An adorable jab. Bravo, Viv. Love it.
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:46 AM
Thanks Line, not so much an inside joke, I was just passing the blame :)
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 2:08 PM
- A delicious love poem, Viv - Long live the love :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:46 AM
Taak, Anne-Lise, happy you liked it. Viv x
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 11:37 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem that flows with rhythm like a song. Simple words glowing with romance..I found the repeat first line in every stanza quite appealing. A winning entry, Viv.
Wigley Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 1:47 AM
Thanks, Vijay, yes, the repetition is an effective instrument sometimes. Regards, Viv
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February 20, 2018 at 10:07 AM
As long as we know who started it, right? That last line took me from the romantic bubble and into giggles. This is a lovely, witty and enjoyable poem that comes complete with a grin that I could feel. 4th Stanza - I think you want tore instead of tear? What do I know, here I risk starting something when all I meant to do is say I enjoyed your talent these last few minutes! All the best ... CayCay
Wigley Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Thanks, CayCay, you're right, as usual. Where would I be without you? Viv x
Parveen Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Hi Viv, that's so romantic, I had to read it over and over again, because it was so enchanting. :)
Wigley Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Thanks, Tahira, you're very kind. Glad you liked it. Viv x
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:12 AM
now that is a romantic poem nice to see your romantic side...
Wigley Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Yes, Silent, I have occasional bouts of gooey. Thanks for dropping by. Regards viv
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