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Inside

a fantasy,

breathless to be

. . . fluttering, softly swept away . . .

in your poetry, our reality

(tingling, a satisfying sensation, embracing)

Love, Petals and Passion

- longing to sway -

to stay,

breathless

 

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~ Something Playful and Passionate ~

* A Romantic Scribble *

The extension to- “Love and Bubbles”

Love, Petals and Passion

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Inside a fantasy, breathless to be . . . fluttering, softly swept away . . in your poetry, our reality (tingling, a satisfying sensation, embracing) Love, petals and Passion - longing to sway - to stay, breathless
--------------------------------- ~ Something Playful and Passionate ~ * A Romantic Scribble * The extension to- “Love and Bubbles”
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Ramel Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 1:00 PM
The picture and poem reminds me of the movie Dangerous Beauty with Catherine McCormick.....she is a Courtesan who engages in an Elizabethan poetic dual at one point in the movie.
Nicole Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 6:07 PM
Thank you Michael, for sharing your thoughts on this picture and what movie it reminds you of. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy
Pickett Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 1:42 AM
Well done!! Was this for a contest? If so where did it land in the rankings? Regardless, this really did encapsulate the photo and your words inspire, as always. Coming from someone who also enjoys exploring different forms. I believe i have one like this in my archive. Good work my friend..
Nicole Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 12:27 PM
Thank you, Jared. No, this wasn't for a contest. A few times I've entered my poetry in contests. (Not really interested in them). I thought so too, with this photo. This is the continuation of my poem "Love and Bubbles." I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Fowler Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Sweetly romantic Brandy! :)
Nicole Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:04 AM
Thank you, Linda. There's romance and passion in such moments, as love collides. You and your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 5:10 AM
Lovely, Brandy ~
Nicole Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 7:10 PM
Thank you, Line. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 1:56 PM
Creative way to go with this one. Poetry sometimes can be just that a fantasy. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Nicole Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 6:40 PM
Thank you, Sara. You are exactly right, and this is a beautiful fantasy. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. You're very welcome. My best to you. :) Brandy
Gauthier Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 7:50 PM
Delightful, Brandy ~
Nicole Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 8:26 PM
Thank you, Line. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy
Poet Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 6:00 AM
One can't stop thinking about your charming overture. An excellent pen, as well as thought. Brandy
Nicole Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 7:57 PM
Thank you, Sotto. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. I appreciate your lovely comment, my dear friend. My best to you. :) Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 7:47 AM
You have so much passion! Lovely!
Nicole Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 8:03 PM
Yes, I do. (Blushing) Thank you, Kim. You and your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Tor Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 7:22 PM
What a romantic piece, nicely done in good taste Brandy, what a picture...
Nicole Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 7:48 PM
Love is in the air. Thank you, Michael. I thought the picture matched my words perfectly. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Romios Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 10:54 AM
Really beautiful~ so much like you, in an outstanding spirt and soul. A FAV. Magnificently created.. Panagiota Romios ~~~
Nicole Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Panagiota. Your lovely comment bring a smile to my heart. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites as well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
DiMino Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 3:32 AM
Very beautiful! "breathless to be . . . fluttering, softly swept away . . in your poetry, our reality" Perfectly divine!
Nicole Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 6:53 PM
Thank you, Joe. Your lovely comment is appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Rose  Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 6:21 PM
Your romantic prelude leaves one breathless. Beautiful pen, and ink, poetess
Nicole Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 7:51 PM
Thank you, Mystic. Your lovely comment brings a smile. Such a beautiful thing to say. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kiser Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 1:59 PM
Quite well penned piece.
Nicole Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 6:45 PM
So sweet of you to say. Thank you, M.L Kiser. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
One Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 12:55 PM
I see you are not writing much, I am the same... This one is sensual and so soft and tender as your words always are...
Nicole Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 6:44 PM
When words find me and when the moment is right, that is when I post. Thank you, Silent One. My pen enjoys lingering in beauty, romance and passion. My best to you. :) Brandy
Poet Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 7:36 PM
Brandy, your pen has a wonderful and delectable flavor, and your sentences are so intelligent and effective. Thank you for your comment and visit to my page.
Nicole Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 7:51 PM
My "pen has a wonderful and delectable flavor." I'm smiling. Such a beautiful thing to say. Thank you, Lasaad. Your kind words are appreciated. You're very welcome. My best to you. :) Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 5:01 PM
well, that's a pretty awesome extension!! Nice picture too. Reminded me of one of my very favorite of movies: american Beauty.
Nicole Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 8:38 PM
So kind of you to say, Andrea. I've been wanting to connect another part to "Love and Bubbles." This seemed like a perfect match. I can see the resemblance in this photo, from the movie you are talking about. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kiser Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 1:10 PM
Beautifully done.
Nicole Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 8:33 PM
Thank you, M.L. Kiser. My best to you. :) Brandy
Canerdy Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 8:33 PM
Lovely, vividly descriptive, expressive, Brandy! Janice
Nicole Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 2:02 PM
Thank you, Janice. Your lovely comment brings a smile. My best to you. :) Brandy
Watt Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 11:53 PM
Brandy, your words rise off the page like butterflies, gentle and sensuous "fluttering, softly swept away . .". As you said, playful and passionate. Romantic and melodic like a Tchaikovsky ballet. Such a gift you have, dear friend. Thank you for sharing your Brandy scribbles with us. Hugs ~ John
Nicole Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 9:22 AM
Like butterflies... my words caress the page ? Such a sweet thing to say. :) Thank you, John. A moment like this should leave the heart floating in love and romance- even petals and passion. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. I'm smiling and blushing, all at the same time. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Jayasankar Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 10:03 PM
"longing to sway, to stay, breathless", how beautifully created dear Brandy...your magical words effortlessly evoke the feeling of love and romance and that is the power of your gifted poetic art ...I hope you are having a blessed week my dear friend...Hugs...~ Ani
Nicole Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 7:07 PM
Dear Anitha, you truly humble me with all your kind words and compliments about my poetry. I'm just a simple woman that writes from the heart. I'm in complete awe with you saying: "that is the power of your gifted poetic art." Thank you, my sweet friend. I am doing well. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Mcconnell Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 12:03 PM
Such a sweet tasty pen Brandy, such words so wise working in our minds. Have a blessed day,Gordon
Nicole Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 5:00 PM
Love is in the air. Thank you, Gordon. Such a beautiful thing to say. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Horsman Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 8:22 PM
Your title says it all, Brandy, and the poetry goes on to enhance the very feeling.
Nicole Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 3:43 PM
Thank you, Harry. Love, romance and passion collide. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Callus Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 6:21 AM
You tackle romantic and passionate poems with such apparent ease, Brandy. Love, bubbles, petals and passion...the playful list takes on a wider dimension :) ~ Regards and hugs // paul
Nicole Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 4:13 PM
Thank you, Paul. Such a lovely compliment. I'm smiling. :) Love, romance and passion are my favorite emotions to curl around. To embrace. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
May Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:41 PM
Lost in the fantasy of passion and petals, Lovely write Brandy
Nicole Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 7:38 AM
Such a wonderful fantasy to become lost in. Thank you, Joseph. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 11:13 PM
Riding on the wings of poesy with the scent of rose petals sifting through the air and sending goose bumps all through the naked skin !So expressive and sensual a poem....Brandy !
Nicole Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 3:50 PM
It's almost Valentine's Day. Yes, love is in the air. Your comment is so breathtaking and beautiful. A magical, exciting and sensual moment, as rose petals dance softly along the skin. Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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