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Love Or Hate Minichu

I want-I need to love
                                                     
let's sit for some cookies and a cup of hot tea
   
oh my dove
Why do you hate
                                                     
your words always sting like a bee
                       
you wait
My friend
                                                       
love on my knee
                                                           
bend
I want-I need to love
                                                 
your words always sting like a bee
   
bend
Date Written: 2/5/2021
14 Place
Let's Minichu on love or hate Poetry Contest
Contest Judged:3/5/2021 Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 3/5/2021 8:44:00 AM
Hi Paula, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thank you, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Have a blessed day/week................
Date: 3/5/2021 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Paula! Linda
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2021 6:59:00 AM
Thank you, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this one. It was an honor to have a win. Have a blessed day................
Date: 3/5/2021 3:48:00 AM
Paula, thanx for participating in my contest. You explained how love and hate can be expressed through both words and actions. Congrats for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2021 6:56:00 AM
Thank you, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this love/hate write. It was an honor to have a win in your contest. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day................
Date: 2/8/2021 10:02:00 PM
Very well done Paula. Not easy for sure.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/10/2021 7:20:00 AM
Thank you, for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day................
Date: 2/7/2021 11:15:00 AM
Interesting one you did, Paula. These are not that easy to do, but you pulled it off!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/8/2021 7:37:00 AM
Thank you, for writing. Glad you like this one. It was fun to write. Have a blessed and wonderful day................
Date: 2/7/2021 7:29:00 AM
This is lovely Paula.., More power..Best wishes in the contest..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/8/2021 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, for writing and for your best in the contest. Have a blessed and wonderful day................
Date: 2/6/2021 6:40:00 AM
Nicely done, Paula :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/7/2021 7:22:00 AM
Thank you, for writing. Glad you like one. Have a blessed and wonderful day................
Date: 2/6/2021 4:02:00 AM
That is a great minichu. I find this form very tough. Was wondering what to write. You did this very well. All the best for contest. Take care Rama
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/6/2021 6:23:00 AM
Thank you, for writing, for your kind words and for your best in the contest. Have a blessed and wonderful day/weekend ................

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