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Love -N- the Lottery

Rick held a winning ticket and a flame

He said, “Dear, I love you more than this claim!”

Just before he set fire

She charged with a live wire

And soon a wealthy widow she became

passionsatirei love youlimerick

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Poet Destroyer A

June 2, 2012 at 5:33 PM

I'm still waiting on that car.. love it..pd

Gwendolen Song

January 17, 2012 at 5:33 AM

You don't CARE ANYTHING about money, do you , Nat? ha ha...I loved this entry from day one...you have a twisted way of displaying your affection in this fantastic limerick!! Just smashing...(I have coffee in hand...the lids are opening...). Off to find another one of yours....

Ralph Taylor

January 16, 2012 at 7:52 PM

Congrats, Natalie. Excellent. Nice going. luv Ralph

Kim Merryman

January 16, 2012 at 3:07 PM

Good one, Natalie! Congrats on your win. Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 16, 2012 at 11:32 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Christopher Bunton

January 16, 2012 at 6:36 AM

Congratulations

Nette Onclaud

January 16, 2012 at 5:44 AM

wise woman and a fun limerick, nat.. super congrats on the great win! :) huggs!

David Williams

January 16, 2012 at 1:48 AM

Natalie congrats on your win, oohh that'll hurt..David

Andrea Dietrich

January 15, 2012 at 4:14 PM

YOurs was so great, Natalie. Congrats on your win.

Lizanne Scholtz

January 15, 2012 at 2:21 PM

Congratulations on your win Natalie. Elizabeth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 15, 2012 at 12:42 PM

congrats Natalie on a great win for these winning lines of lottery Limerick luv..

Debra Squyres

January 11, 2012 at 6:16 PM

Now that's a sudden jolt !! lol laughing here...hope I didn't wake Dad !! lol Excellent limerick !!

Andrea Dietrich

January 11, 2012 at 5:33 PM

hahaha, your comment about star trek made me laugh. WEll, I think viewing earth before coming here must have been a bit like Star Trek. I believe we all have the ability to simply "think" of where we want to go and we will be there (something we surely will relearn upon our return home). It's the only explanation for how God is able to be so many places and his angels too!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 11, 2012 at 5:29 AM

Pleasant and a smile poem Natalie,perfect. Thank you for reeding my poem.oxox love from Anne-Lise

Lisa Cooper

January 10, 2012 at 1:16 PM

remind me not to rate your poetry low lol I wouldn't want to get a live wire lol great pen! love and light!

Gwendolen Song

January 7, 2012 at 11:22 AM

TDZZZZZ....I can hear the flesh burning now!! The lucky widow!! A great entry too!! You and I oughtta go into business marrying these lottery men and then start a detective agency trying to figure out how they all disappeared!!! ha ha. Happy Day, Nat. Gwendolen