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Love Minichu

Compassion-brightened glow love at work radiantly emitting gracious rays divine flow… pardon so free God’s love toward forgiving ways with glee… love’s height peace, faith, truth days light… compassion-brightened glow God’s love* toward forgiving ways light! *Jude 1:21 Keep yourselves in the love of God, looking for the mercy of our Lord Jesus Christ unto eternal life. March 1, 2021 Honorable Mention, "Let's Minichu on love or hate" Contest Sponsored by Mohan Chutani; judged on 3/5/2021. Second line of Stanzas 2, 3, 4 edited according to Sponsor's rules after judging.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/5/2021 8:50:00 AM

Hi Beata, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/5/2021 6:51:00 AM

Hi Beata. This is a beautiful shining poem. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/5/2021 12:44:00 AM

Beata, thanx for participating in my contest. I remember you having done perfectly in my other Minichu contests. Here, you made a mistake of not aligning the rhyme of middle lines with each other. Anyway, congrats for you placement. Best. Mohan

Beata Agustin
Date: 3/5/2021 3:00:00 AM

Thanks so much for the placement, albeit my departure from the rules. I already edited the second line of stanzas 2, 3, and 4 after learning from my mistake. Thanks again. God bless you.