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Love Me Not

Love me not for outward appearance the sum of me is far more than that Love me not for the things I do for you that just scratches the surface of me Love me not for worldly goods and possessions for all of these soon will vanish like dust Love me just as I am with warts and all take time, learn to understand my moods Love me for the words that spring from my pen these sentences will tell you what I am about Love me and accept I often walk a different path and in return you will hold my heart in your hands

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/22/2014 8:34:00 PM

Consider putting the love me verses between each of the love me not verses. I think this would add a novel effect to the piece. Either way I like what you have written.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/21/2014 11:39:00 AM

how unconditional is the gift of love, shadow.. this is exceptionally fluent in its imagery and plea.. simply amazing!.. thank you for keeping me in mind in your recent contest; so honored!.. hugggs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/22/2014 1:47:00 PM

A lovely poem Nette it deserved to win ty for your lovely inspiring comment Shadow x smile hugs

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/21/2014 7:09:00 AM

This is a splendid and an incredible write my friend! I surely loved reading this dynamic poem here this morning! You have presented a terrific poem, one that I loved to read! What a superior piece, Great Work!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/21/2014 7:27:00 AM

ty Russell I am very pleased you like it your comments are very inspiring too Shadow x smile hug