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Love Lost

If I had never known you...would I have known sadness? You came like a warm Summer breeze and left like a Winter's frost In between there was Heaven and in Heaven there was you passionate, hungry, filled with life and yet...a loneliness stirred deep inside that I could not reach it burned on the farthest hills of your soul from a time kept secret that allowed you brief interludes of happiness before a darkness...beyond my reach beyond my understanding and so we parted...like we never were still, I think of you and wonder 10/12/18 contest Any new free verse poem

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Date: 11/5/2018 12:34:00 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in LuLoo's contest, Frederic - blessings and best wishes - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/28/2018 4:06:00 PM
Wow, superbly penned, Frederic. Congrats on your most deserving gold medal win.
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Date: 10/28/2018 11:42:00 AM
that first line..ohhhh wow, you always amaze me. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. -luloo :)
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Date: 10/12/2018 5:58:00 PM
A very touching poem Frederic. I can feel it as I read it. Well expressed, well done! :)
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