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Dear Anemuna, Outer Space would not be the same without you, my silky and slimy extraterrestrial love- To think of all the saucering we’ve been through, the far distance beyond, down and up above. The Andromedans whisper as we soar by, hearing your voice in the distant future- Oh, how our chariot of fire flies so high, when my slime malts, you're my mending suture. You from Venus and me from Mars, constantly using that ol’ UFO to fly back and forth- In your three eyes I see the magic of the stars, and those six hands bring so much worth. Since we multiplied little Unomina and Pebloy, you’ve been so grateful for their creation- We always wanted an enormous twelve-foot boy, and an innocent girl born under Orion Constellation. The cosmos have nothing on you, dear, the Aries in you brings out such blazing fire- My five hearts race when you are near, bringing out my adoring Gemini desire. Like water droplets easing rock to dust, the Solar System cries when you float by- kissing that yellow lip is definitely a must, I dream of marrying you under the Aquarius sky. I would travel to Earth and back with you, just to be with you on the beach’s sand- we would swim in the ocean by Katmandu, so free with no worries, on hot dry land. If you ever feel lonely on Venus without me, remember how my one eye looks at you- I may be green and you may be royal blue, but it’s out extraterrestrial passion… that’s pulls us through. Love always, Neeno Love Letter Contest November 8, 2017

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Date: 11/15/2017 8:39:00 AM
Great imagination as always. Congratulations Loo Loo. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 11/15/2017 7:12:00 AM
Wow! Back to congratulate you on your win:)
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Date: 11/14/2017 3:39:00 AM
Great unique view of the subject Laura. Your imagination shines brightly.
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Date: 11/13/2017 7:47:00 PM
Giggle, I was going to say what Jan said :) Congratulations! xomo
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Date: 11/13/2017 7:03:00 PM
Your poem was out of this world congrats LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/13/2017 6:33:00 AM
Far out! Thanks for entering with your tales of transgalactic trysts, Laura, enjoyed reading. Viv x
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Date: 11/12/2017 11:39:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura on your placement.
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:19:00 PM
This is a very clever take in the contest.. Great imagination and creativity.. You have developed into an awesome poet..
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2017 4:42:00 AM
aww thank you sweet Man :) luulloooo
Date: 11/8/2017 7:00:00 AM
Wonderful imagination, Luloo:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2017 4:41:00 AM
thank you sweet Jo :)
Date: 11/8/2017 6:23:00 AM
Love this fun poem on extraterrestrials!!! Blessings, Luloo!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2017 4:41:00 AM
many thanks lovely KIm :)
Date: 11/8/2017 5:58:00 AM
This is so much fun...Enjoyed it, Laura loo
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2017 4:41:00 AM
thank you Arturo :)

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