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Love Is Vulnerable

Bewildered by the sting of betrayal, your fears are dragged from the shadows for all to see, and reason races through the gauntlet of choices available; each a dagger piercing your heart. You woke from a dream composed of reality defused with imagination, where love was tentative and yet so precious as to awe you with its beauty, yet scare you with its fragility. You poured out your soul and cried aloud over the pain love had unleashed. What was left unsaid could not be put into words, there were no simple answers. Your love was hot, passionate, and on fire, but that degree of love is vulnerable, like a moth to a flame. The moth cannot help being a moth with all its faults and desires; while the flame cannot be anything other than a flame. And so, the meeting of the two, although spectacular, is short-lived. Like a moth to fire's flame, he seduced you with the beauty of his words, and you fell prey to their magic, only to realize love was but an illusion destined to disappear.

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Date: 6/1/2019 7:22:00 PM
Wow! The sad beauty of the emotional outpouring is as captivating as it is soul-baring. Such poignancy, pain and passion is expressed in this lost love gem, Emile. Simply superb! Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/1/2019 7:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Susan, your words honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/30/2019 3:45:00 PM
Such a fabulous poem, Emile:-) Congratulations on your win,
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/30/2019 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/25/2019 2:14:00 AM
This poem has such depth of pain that the emotions are almost palpable Emile. It's sadness profound. Congratulations on your deserving second placement. xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/25/2019 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I always appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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