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Love is invisible an undetectable secret weapon. Some use it naturally others for their advantage, manipulating it like a weapon intoxicating the vulnerable with their twisted toxic methods. Once mastered though there is nothing more powerful than its essence. For it has the capability to engineer uncontrollable reactions, which chemically unbalance the mind. When your heart has lost control the whole body functions for one goal, that is to embrace and embody only love. Who ever the object of your affection, the desire to have feelings reciprocated increase enticing your soul to dance to your song of choice. The heart longs for a match, the soul for a mate, the brain for intellectual thought, while the skin craves for just a touch and the lips for an opportunity to taste fruits unknown, which become ripe with a kiss. Never underestimate the power of love, there is nothing more greater. Once two hearts connect all else is futile - feelings are blind. Another journey begins with the game of love
The Silent One Originally written 11 January 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/30/2018 3:18:00 PM
love is shown and felt from your exquisite writing. love is reflected from within you.
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Date: 3/25/2018 5:57:00 AM
Good Morning Silent - This is beautiful. As the reader reads your words he becomes mesmerized within them for they reach touch and are felt. I very much enjoyed reading your work. Well done throughout including your enhancing music.
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Date: 3/19/2018 2:24:00 AM
Wow! What truth in these words you have wrote..I see you are not only a great poet, but wise also.. I actually enjoyed what I have read.. Hugs--Harriet (Derena)
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Date: 3/13/2018 2:47:00 AM
loved the interaction, and the freedom. you have given in this its a fine write. only wish there was more love in this this world. what a purpose to aim for, thank you my friend for giving us the privilege to read this.
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Date: 3/9/2018 10:47:00 PM
Searching for love..your words expressed the need to share a love with someone. So happy to get to read this:)) pat
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Date: 3/9/2018 3:05:00 PM
This heart-shaped poem beats w/your arterial ink, SO! Such a gracious poem. Ty for sharing your special poetic gift w/us. This poem was a joy to read and re-read. Lovely butterfly inked wings spread upon a flowery canvas of thought. Love and joy always.
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Date: 3/8/2018 12:43:00 PM
Perfect! There is only one bottomless empty in life...and it is not the fuel-tank, our pockets, or even our stomachs groaning--it is the absence of love. Another outstanding write!
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Date: 3/8/2018 10:51:00 AM
Too bad it can't be "harnessed" and used as a "secret weapon"...or "weapon of mass attraction" in hostile times. Excellent topic and treatment of same, S O. One note: in Line 2 of the last stanza, "greater" is the superlative..."more" is unnecessary.
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Date: 3/8/2018 10:13:00 AM
So true, ZZ. Without that attraction, that love magnet we are just floating...without purpose until that irresistible force takes us where it wants to go. It's exciting and intoxicating and even addicting. That is my "drug of choice". Hmmm...there's another poem in there somewhere. lol Your poem has inspired me. :) P.S. check your soup mail
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Date: 3/8/2018 8:12:00 AM
Love is indeed really beautiful and powerful, it s so strange that how sudden and blind it is, how it change a person in seconds and how can we care for someone so much, even more than us and can t bare to lose them, yet another beautiful write it is
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Date: 3/7/2018 8:26:00 PM
Silent One, power of love is a beautiful , but also not understandable..
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Date: 3/7/2018 4:32:00 PM
Very lovely, S-1...undoubtedly the fruit of personal experience! Unfortunately many people take love for granted. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/7/2018 9:51:00 AM
Well written SO. Many readers can relate to this. :) I like the line fruits unknown which become ripe with a kiss :)
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Date: 3/7/2018 9:10:00 AM
Love this! Love such a beautiful thing...I was lost in each and every word,Bless your soul... oh, silent one.
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Date: 3/7/2018 7:55:00 AM
the Game Of Love Is Only Won....When It Is Overseen By His Holy Son....And Once That Has Begun....you just sit back and enjoy the fun....very powerful my friend....very powerful indeed....
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Date: 3/7/2018 6:59:00 AM
Exquisite madness, that's love, at least in its early stages.Your poem says it all. A right riveting read, as someone once said (it wasn't Shakespeare).
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Date: 3/7/2018 2:35:00 AM
very inspiring insightful poem. Truly love is the greatest force on earth.
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Date: 3/6/2018 9:29:00 PM
Very nice.. beautiful and heart touching ....
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Date: 3/6/2018 7:57:00 PM
You Know SO, you're really such a softy, that's what I like about you
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Date: 3/6/2018 7:38:00 PM
A quick comment between terminals, yes indeed 'Love' it is what makes the world go around, turn us upside down, turn us into fools, invisible perhaps? But always transparent. Love can never be hidden! So right though, it has the capability to engineer uncontrollable reactions. which chemically unbalance the mind. A little Bi Polar perhaps? Joking!! A great write....Maria :)
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Date: 3/6/2018 4:59:00 PM
We're on earth not for science and religion...but for love...and it's used for good and bad...an unfortunate alliance with happy and sad...A wonderful write SO ... All the best
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Date: 3/6/2018 2:45:00 PM
Deep. Fruits unknown. Like it. Cool and hot. Hey is that like ...."Love is Like Oxygen". https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FTlM6OBRc8w
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Silent One
Date: 3/6/2018 3:04:00 PM
Thanks LLb...
Date: 3/6/2018 1:25:00 PM
A beautifully on-point write Silent One :)
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Silent One
Date: 3/6/2018 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Judy..
Date: 3/6/2018 12:48:00 PM
Agreed, beautifully written SO...
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Silent One
Date: 3/6/2018 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Charlie..
Date: 3/6/2018 12:21:00 PM
So true Silent..its so powerful...Nicely expressed..
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Silent One
Date: 3/6/2018 3:05:00 PM
Thank you Joseph..
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