Jan Allison Poet Questionku

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Love Is In the Air

champagne on ice
picnic in forest 
is romance in the air

drops to one knee
ready to propose 
what will her answer be

she shyly smiles
gives him her reply
will wedding bells ring out

diamond sparkles
third finger left hand
should they ring their parents

plans to be made
venue needs choosing
how much will it all cost

big day arrives
bride and groom smiling
will their happiness last 

   
10~18~15
Checked using How Many Syllables
Contest Questionku Two
Sponsor Richard Lamoureux

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John Beam October 26, 2015 at 7:08 PM Congregations Jan on your win. I really liked how you answered with questions continuing the flow Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 7:11 PM Thanks John i really enjoyed the challenge ... i just hope they have a happy outcome in life! hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 8:14 AM Oh Jan! This an absolutely a romantic win! Love, Balveen Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 12:51 PM It's not written from personal experience lol:-) I proposed to my hubby:-) hugs Jan xx

Estela Canama October 26, 2015 at 4:35 AM Great and wonderfully crafted! Congrats, Jan. Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 12:51 PM Thanks so much Estela:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 26, 2015 at 1:25 AM Very beautiful n exquisite work Jan! Congrats on top place win! Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 12:51 PM Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight October 25, 2015 at 7:49 PM Hi Jan, back to read your poem again and congratulate you on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison October 26, 2015 at 2:09 AM Thanks again Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Mohn October 25, 2015 at 6:42 PM Back for congrats Jan...I knew you would place well :) and congrats also on your impressive run of winners! Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 6:43 PM I'm flying high today David... but believe me I still get my fair share of N/A to add to my growing collection lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores October 25, 2015 at 6:28 PM Congratulations in your win Jan. Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 6:35 PM Thanks so much Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2015 at 5:03 PM Way to go, Jan!! BIG congrats. Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 5:08 PM Thanks Andrea I am delighted with my winning streak today:-) hugs jan xx

Arlene Smith October 25, 2015 at 4:35 PM Congrats on top win, sweetness!!.. Beautiful Questionku!!... Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 4:44 PM Thanks so much Arlene i was delighted to place so highly:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser October 25, 2015 at 4:30 PM Nice romantic piece, Jan! Congrats on your win :) Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 4:34 PM Thanks Laura I enjoyed writing for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi October 25, 2015 at 4:18 PM Congratulations on your win of a questionable love and marriage. i REALLY ENJOYED IT. Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 4:29 PM Thanks Ralph I really enjoyed the challenge and was delighted to place so highly:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy October 25, 2015 at 3:17 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Janice Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 3:19 PM Thanks so much Janice:-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Godwin October 25, 2015 at 2:49 PM Romance is always a winner to me. Congratulations!! A Beautiful Qu ... CayCay Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 2:52 PM Thanks so much CayCay today is a VERY good day for me in so so many ways :-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus October 25, 2015 at 1:52 PM Hi Jan! Always pleased to come back with congratulations...especially when we're talking about first place!:) Well done! We're keeping each other great company today:) Hugs // paul Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 2:02 PM People will start to talk Paul lol :-) see you soon:-)hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley October 25, 2015 at 12:38 PM snoggy. I'm buying a new keyboard tomorrow x Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 12:40 PM ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley October 25, 2015 at 12:36 PM Yaaaaay! Was I right, or was I right? Congrats, and huge, rib crushing, lung evacuating, dribbly snoogy hug (pause for breath), Viv x Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 12:39 PM ooh thanks Mr Viv - hubby is in the bath so he won't see me flirting lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane October 25, 2015 at 12:36 PM Inspirational for young lovers...Congratulations, Jan! Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 12:40 PM Thanks Lin - it is pure fiction on my behalf - I proposed to my hubby and it wasn't a leap year lol:-) hugs jan xx

Michael Tor October 25, 2015 at 12:17 PM Excellent win Jan for Richards contest. Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 12:18 PM I'm so so happy Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux October 25, 2015 at 12:13 PM My favorite is the forth one. Congratulations Jan. Jan Allison October 25, 2015 at 12:15 PM Oh Wow Richard thank you so much for my first place win - I am delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein October 20, 2015 at 3:21 PM Beautiful poem my dear, I'm really glad I've got the chance to read it ... :) Jan Allison October 20, 2015 at 3:55 PM Thank you so much Dalia:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mohn October 20, 2015 at 10:53 AM you nailed this one Jan..marvelous :) Jan Allison October 20, 2015 at 11:06 AM Thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie October 19, 2015 at 1:06 PM oh jan, this is Beautiful my friend....and I simply Love the way it ends....and it should last if they take that fateful step....and if it was TRULY done for Love then Love will be always kept....;) Jan Allison October 19, 2015 at 1:10 PM Thanks as ever for the beautiful poetic response Eric:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France October 19, 2015 at 12:18 PM Jan, your questionkus are so sweet and charming, a loving 7 and thanks for visiting my funny kids poem ~~ Jan Allison October 19, 2015 at 1:09 PM Thanks so much Broken Wings I hope Richard likes them:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2015 at 8:12 PM Most of the answers are yes until we get to the last one. then it's 50/50 hahaha. These days anyway. Well done, jan. I am so behind on contests now. Can't seem to motivate myself. Ayyy. Jan Allison October 19, 2015 at 1:13 AM I struggle to write these days - maybe the apathy on soup is catching up :-( hugs jan xx

Tim Smith October 18, 2015 at 5:36 PM Love the fairytale romance Jan. Nice string of questionku. Jan Allison October 18, 2015 at 5:37 PM Thanks Tim I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx

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