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Love Is In the Air

champagne on ice
picnic in forest 
is romance in the air

drops to one knee
ready to propose 
what will her answer be

she shyly smiles
gives him her reply
will wedding bells ring out

diamond sparkles
third finger left hand
should they ring their parents

plans to be made
venue needs choosing
how much will it all cost

big day arrives
bride and groom smiling
will their happiness last 

   
10~18~15
Checked using How Many Syllables
Contest Questionku Two
Sponsor Richard Lamoureux

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2015

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John Beam Date: 10/26/2015 7:08:00 PM Congregations Jan on your win. I really liked how you answered with questions continuing the flow Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 7:11:00 PM Thanks John i really enjoyed the challenge ... i just hope they have a happy outcome in life! hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema Date: 10/26/2015 8:14:00 AM Oh Jan! This an absolutely a romantic win! Love, Balveen Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 12:51:00 PM It's not written from personal experience lol:-) I proposed to my hubby:-) hugs Jan xx

Estela Canama Date: 10/26/2015 4:35:00 AM Great and wonderfully crafted! Congrats, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 12:51:00 PM Thanks so much Estela:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/26/2015 1:25:00 AM Very beautiful n exquisite work Jan! Congrats on top place win! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 12:51:00 PM Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight Date: 10/25/2015 7:49:00 PM Hi Jan, back to read your poem again and congratulate you on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/26/2015 2:09:00 AM Thanks again Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Mohn Date: 10/25/2015 6:42:00 PM Back for congrats Jan...I knew you would place well :) and congrats also on your impressive run of winners! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 6:43:00 PM I'm flying high today David... but believe me I still get my fair share of N/A to add to my growing collection lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 10/25/2015 6:28:00 PM Congratulations in your win Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 6:35:00 PM Thanks so much Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/25/2015 5:03:00 PM Way to go, Jan!! BIG congrats. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 5:08:00 PM Thanks Andrea I am delighted with my winning streak today:-) hugs jan xx

Arlene Smith Date: 10/25/2015 4:35:00 PM Congrats on top win, sweetness!!.. Beautiful Questionku!!... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 4:44:00 PM Thanks so much Arlene i was delighted to place so highly:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser Date: 10/25/2015 4:30:00 PM Nice romantic piece, Jan! Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 4:34:00 PM Thanks Laura I enjoyed writing for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi Date: 10/25/2015 4:18:00 PM Congratulations on your win of a questionable love and marriage. i REALLY ENJOYED IT. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 4:29:00 PM Thanks Ralph I really enjoyed the challenge and was delighted to place so highly:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy Date: 10/25/2015 3:17:00 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Janice Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 3:19:00 PM Thanks so much Janice:-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/25/2015 2:49:00 PM Romance is always a winner to me. Congratulations!! A Beautiful Qu ... CayCay Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 2:52:00 PM Thanks so much CayCay today is a VERY good day for me in so so many ways :-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 10/25/2015 1:52:00 PM Hi Jan! Always pleased to come back with congratulations...especially when we're talking about first place!:) Well done! We're keeping each other great company today:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 2:02:00 PM People will start to talk Paul lol :-) see you soon:-)hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley Date: 10/25/2015 12:38:00 PM snoggy. I'm buying a new keyboard tomorrow x Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 12:40:00 PM ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 10/25/2015 12:36:00 PM Inspirational for young lovers...Congratulations, Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 12:40:00 PM Thanks Lin - it is pure fiction on my behalf - I proposed to my hubby and it wasn't a leap year lol:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley Date: 10/25/2015 12:36:00 PM Yaaaaay! Was I right, or was I right? Congrats, and huge, rib crushing, lung evacuating, dribbly snoogy hug (pause for breath), Viv x Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 12:39:00 PM ooh thanks Mr Viv - hubby is in the bath so he won't see me flirting lol:-) hugs jan xx

Michael Tor Date: 10/25/2015 12:17:00 PM Excellent win Jan for Richards contest. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 12:18:00 PM I'm so so happy Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/25/2015 12:13:00 PM My favorite is the forth one. Congratulations Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/25/2015 12:15:00 PM Oh Wow Richard thank you so much for my first place win - I am delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein Date: 10/20/2015 3:21:00 PM Beautiful poem my dear, I'm really glad I've got the chance to read it ... :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/20/2015 3:55:00 PM Thank you so much Dalia:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mohn Date: 10/20/2015 10:53:00 AM you nailed this one Jan..marvelous :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/20/2015 11:06:00 AM Thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie Date: 10/19/2015 1:06:00 PM oh jan, this is Beautiful my friend....and I simply Love the way it ends....and it should last if they take that fateful step....and if it was TRULY done for Love then Love will be always kept....;) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/19/2015 1:10:00 PM Thanks as ever for the beautiful poetic response Eric:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France Date: 10/19/2015 12:18:00 PM Jan, your questionkus are so sweet and charming, a loving 7 and thanks for visiting my funny kids poem ~~ Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/19/2015 1:09:00 PM Thanks so much Broken Wings I hope Richard likes them:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/18/2015 8:12:00 PM Most of the answers are yes until we get to the last one. then it's 50/50 hahaha. These days anyway. Well done, jan. I am so behind on contests now. Can't seem to motivate myself. Ayyy. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/19/2015 1:13:00 AM I struggle to write these days - maybe the apathy on soup is catching up :-( hugs jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 10/18/2015 5:36:00 PM Love the fairytale romance Jan. Nice string of questionku. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/18/2015 5:37:00 PM Thanks Tim I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx

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