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poor puppet dances to the tune of her master - he’s pulling her strings! Jan Allison 9th April 2015 Contest: - Judy Konos Get Your Senryu On ~awarded 1st place~

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Date: 4/30/2015 2:31:00 AM
great! :-)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/30/2015 2:35:00 AM
Thanks Edz:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/26/2015 7:29:00 PM
:) PD
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Date: 4/22/2015 5:52:00 PM
Good1
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/22/2015 5:53:00 PM
thanks so much Asma:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 4/18/2015 5:08:00 PM
Jan, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/18/2015 5:18:00 PM
Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/14/2015 11:42:00 AM
More than just words and greatly significant lines for a wonderful day as this. I am happy to stop by. Great write and keep it up because I will still come knocking at the door of your wonderful pages.
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Date: 4/14/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thank so much for your continued support Funom:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/13/2015 10:15:00 AM
Jan, a lovely portrayal of the relationship between master and puppet. Congrats for fine win. Mohan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/13/2015 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Mohan - sometimes the strings need to be cut! hugs jan xx
Date: 4/13/2015 8:59:00 AM
Congrats on the First place win Jan, well deserved. I loved the picture and write here. I agree with that sentiment, ha, ha ,ha. Have a wonderful day girl and pass those demands down the line a 7 for me....Sharon G.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/13/2015 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Sharon:-) Irrespective of where we were placed on the list we all got a first place - so lovely to share the top spot with some other lovely poems:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/12/2015 3:29:00 PM
AWWWWWW Poor Puppet. Just tell that man to do it himself! good one!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/12/2015 3:41:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Judy I was delighted with my first place in your contest. I have had some lovely comments - the one from Abdul in particular has made my day - wish he had joined in the fun - I hope he does the next contest of yours:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/12/2015 11:52:00 AM
You know what? I liked yours better than most others. I had written a similar one and decided not to enter because I found yours better. Nice write. I like it very much.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/13/2015 9:07:00 AM
Judy has a new contest up - i do hope you enter it:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2015 3:47:00 PM
Abdul....no two people are alike. Wish you had entered and you can't say someone's is better than yours. Opinions differ and someone has told me that you are a fantastic poet...At any rate, Nice to meet you...now "Go For It"....we are waiting.....
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:26:00 PM
Oh Abdul your comment has simply made my day - I wish you had entered the contest as we all got first place and your write would have been on the top step too:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/12/2015 11:14:00 AM
Congrats on winning first place!!!!!! I have to say though, I would rated this one much higher!!!!!!!! xxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/12/2015 2:24:00 PM
I Arthur I HAVE to agree with you lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/12/2015 10:23:00 AM
Hi Jan, back again to congratulate you on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/12/2015 10:09:00 AM
Hi Jan! Back with congratulations; we are all on a par! hugs // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/12/2015 2:22:00 PM
Some would disagree Paul ... but you and I are grown up enough to know otherwise! Thanks for dropping by:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 10:15:00 PM
Congrats to you, my friend. Luv ya!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/12/2015 3:43:00 AM
Cheers Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 5:38:00 PM
congrats Jan nice poem, and I'm not pulling your string :o)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/11/2015 5:41:00 PM
Thanks for the positive comment - I don't like my strings being pulled!:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 2:49:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Jan
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Date: 4/11/2015 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/11/2015 11:05:00 AM
I needed to reach my target audience, Jan... and no, we are not all equal, otherwise the list would be in alphabetical order of surnames.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/11/2015 11:22:00 AM
Judy has explained to you how the places are awarded in order of when they are received - we are ALL equal - will you please stop using MY poems to comment like this otherwise I will have to block you from commenting.
Date: 4/11/2015 10:36:00 AM
ALL OF YOU TO NOTE I was awarded a much higher placement than JAN on the 1st list, and yet apart from Andrea Dietrich, none of you bothered to write about my entry before the contest. I consistently write to a high standard, yet your support is missing. (I exclude Jan and Paul who do write on lots of my poems.)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/11/2015 10:51:00 AM
JULIA you did NOT get awarded a higher place than me in ANY contest where we all got a first place. I would appreciate if you didn't post comments on my poems like - putting negative comments is NOT a way to endear people to comment on your poems! Jan
Date: 4/10/2015 11:56:00 PM
Well this poem is such a gem, and the photo is the icing on the cake!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/11/2015 3:22:00 AM
LOL Arthur - for some reason it reminds me of that drunken clown pic lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/10/2015 6:14:00 PM
it sure is jan blind held in deep beauty excellent pen dear pal wishing you a blessed weekend
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/10/2015 6:17:00 PM
Thanks Liam:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 4/10/2015 6:11:00 PM
Great write Jan! I love the picture it fits really well with the write. Hugs back to you
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/10/2015 6:17:00 PM
Thanks Tammy:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/10/2015 2:39:00 PM
In love many things happen, this is too sometimes. Beautifully done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/10/2015 2:40:00 PM
Thanks as ever for your support BL:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/9/2015 10:44:00 PM
Love it Jan...the title is great also!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/10/2015 1:26:00 AM
Thanks David I do like to play with the title:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/9/2015 1:51:00 AM
solid delivery of your message, jan... a well done senryu!.. huggs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/9/2015 1:52:00 AM
Thanks Nette:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/8/2015 7:06:00 PM
You know that puppet looks a lot like me except for the dress. Yeah...my dress is a bright pink!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/8/2015 7:12:00 PM
lol :-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/8/2015 7:03:00 PM
I think my ex-wife thought it was the other way around, I clearly remember those strings being on me. Great poem for the contest. I love it!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/8/2015 7:12:00 PM
Yes I guess it does work both ways Armand:-) thanks for dropping by :-) Hugs jan xx
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