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Love Is Beyond Comprehensioin

For I am but a woman who needs love, someone longing for true adoration- It’s been said love should be free as a dove, and the reason for our born creation. This is true, yet love is o, so much more. It’s a subtle look of passion when near- For love should be your genuine amour, felt without fleshly temptation nor fear. Seek not what is lost, but what has been gained. For there is redemption when you hold on until but only one thing has remained… the soft light that brilliantly shines at dawn. Love is a rescue that can’t be returned- for this kind of love is bestowed, not earned. March 6, 2019

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Date: 5/10/2019 3:28:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations. Keep spreading love. God bless you.
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Date: 5/8/2019 10:14:00 PM
I love the last line of this poem, Lu Loo: "love is bestowed, not earned". That's so true because love comes from the heart, not the head and we can't deny what the heart wants except at our own peril. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 5/8/2019 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the what is love contest..
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Date: 3/12/2019 7:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Lu Loo. Lovely. Well penned.
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Date: 3/8/2019 7:33:00 AM
A well deserved win, my friend. Bravo!
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/8/2019 12:11:00 PM
thank you Sweet Caren! :)-luloo
Date: 3/7/2019 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/8/2019 12:11:00 PM
thank you lovely Eve :)-luloo
Date: 3/6/2019 11:18:00 AM
Congrats. SK.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/8/2019 12:11:00 PM
many thanks sweet Sara :)-luloo
Date: 3/6/2019 8:44:00 AM
This is soooo beautiful Lu Loo!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/8/2019 12:11:00 PM
aww thank you dear Bobby! :)-luloo

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