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Ottava Rima Love is truly a gift from the heavens, blessed gracefully on unsuspecting hearts. Each day the feelings joyfully heighten as lovers have emotions to impart. Two lilting hearts flutter, at the mention of intimacy moments on the start. If this gift is yours then be grateful for good times spent with a person you adore. Think of dying without ever living being locked inside your own selfish orb. Never knowing the true joy of giving for your world has you totally absorbed. So it's best to be blessed with the loving that comes when two souls sing on one accord. Dear God, we humbly ask you up above grace our meager hearts with the gift of love. 8/4/17

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Date: 9/25/2017 8:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Janis . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/25/2017 10:38:00 AM
Janis, I recall the contest! Congratulations on your wonderful win.
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:33:00 PM
Our life is full of gifts, and I can safely say that love is the most priceless of them all! I love your poem, Janis, and the ending appeals with its romantic touch. Regards // paul
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/8/2017 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Paul. It is always good to hear your well wishes and lovely comments. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 8/7/2017 9:14:00 AM
And such a wonderful gift, Janis, like your poem:) P.S. If for the contest, you may have to change the title..
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/7/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thanks lots Jo.At first I could not imagine what you meant then I read the rules again. I see. I really appreciate the token of caring. Love is actually caring.
Date: 8/4/2017 9:44:00 PM
Set off with the final two lines :) GL in contest!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/5/2017 1:10:00 AM
Thanks and blessings for the good wishes.

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