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Written for the 'Love poem using four words' contest by Darla Seely

 

Love Is a Four Letter Word

When my mind is mute from pain,
I seek your oval moon eyes,
to glow like a star at dusk.
To ease me away from the edge.
To show me calm in the rain.

My soul is akin to your love.
I ache for you to sing my name.
Echo our song in the tone of a harp.

To wake up with you at dawn,
feel your soft gold hair,
to feel safe in your warm arms.
To hold you near.
Rest my face upon your silk skin,
form and flow our lips in joy.
With your hand on my head,
gaze at your chic aura all day.

If I was to draw you a home,
I'd make a room for my soul,
to ink you a poem each day.

If only I was a wing,
you a bird,
then we can soar high into the dark sky.
Run step by step up a hill,
but not fall,
like 'Jack and Jill.'

If only we were able to stop time,
so I can walk the path home.
Then life may turn fair,
then when the wind blew with woe,
we'd be safe to dote in our vows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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White  Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Thank you for your comment I am in the middle of reading your poem's and I find that They encourage me to write more. Also thought rendering I am enjoying the experience. Thank you. (yes a bluebirds fan)
One Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Glad they inspire you.. Thank you.
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Back to say CONGRATS on a win!
Seeker Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 7:38 PM
B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l. ~ congratulations on your win, Silent One! Truly a love poem that warms the heart radiating attributes of purity, commitment, joy, innocence, playfulness, intimacy, courage and poetry in motion.
Poet Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Back with congratulations on your trophy win Dear friend SO.
One Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Thank you..
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 9:12 AM
The unique solidity of fruitful expressed choices is befitting of excellence and a wealth of praise, Silent One! Blessings and Aloha, William
One Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Thank you
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Glad to see you win the TOP spot. BIG congrats, SO.
One Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 1:06 PM
Thank you..
Empress Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations on top win! Well deserved! The best ever
One Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 1:07 PM
Thank you
Dutta Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 7:22 AM
Yes. Love is a four letter word to describe. Congrats to win Top. Blessings
One Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 1:07 PM
Thank you..
Goldsmith Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 2:29 PM
"LOVE" the most powerful word we have. It is Not used like it should be. Show/Tell LOVE to others. Have a day filled with LOVE...................
Baker Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 4:52 PM
A touching and soulful Love poem, Silent One. Love is the supreme four-letter word! You did an excellent job with this fine entry for the contest, my friend. Good Luck! Bill
Brotherton Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 10:44 AM
A wonderful and creative poem you have given us. I think it is a sure winner. A favorite that i will read time and time again.
Frank Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 10:36 AM
Awesome....love beyond all measure. Great White.
Silence Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 8:45 AM
Wow! The diversity of the brilliance you weave are truly amazing, my friend! This piece truly takes one’s breath away..inked for a special someone..pulls at my soul strings! Your way of inking truly captivates me each time..the words, the depth, the delicate allure of this piece is truly astounding (as always)! Your pieces make me wish to read on..like a novel, a tale that continues..always awestruck with the imagery you create in minds, feeling your words on a different level!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 1:54 AM
No word exceeds four letters, yet you managed to concoct a masterpiece on love, with so many allusions, imagery and subtle metaphors. So well done. Blessings.
Rolland Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 12:02 AM
enchanting declaration, love is the most precious word i know, take care
Sharma  Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 10:36 PM
Oh my, this is such an elegant and magical poem, expressing deep feelings for the beloved, illustrated by delicate wordplay and beautiful imageries... I love almost all the lines here, "I seek your oval moon eyes, to glow like a star at dusk" So profound!! "Echo our song in the tone of a harp" Eloquently crafted.. "If only I was a wing, you a bird, then we can soar high into the dark sky" Ah, I don't think I've read something this unique and beautiful in a long while.. Absolutely impeccable
Sharma  Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 10:37 PM
And those ending lines, a very enchanting take for the contest, Silent One.. There's always so much to learn and admire in your poems.. Enjoyed reading this! :)
Roper Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 9:45 PM
Tell me, "How do I love thee", full of imagery and metaphors. Splendent.
George Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 9:08 PM
Within the constraint of using words not exceeding four, you have written a wonderful love poem which has all the flavour of an intoxicating romance. Your symphony of love is like the crooning of a dove.".....we can soar high into the dark sky. Run step by step up a hill, but not fall, like 'Jack and Jill.' Enjoyed the playful comical tone of these lines. I have written one poem which I am ashamed to enter when I compare mine with some of the great entries read here. Yours I am sure will be placed at the top.
Dutta Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:57 PM
Your every line is speaking in LOVE. Outstanding ! Most impressive poem about Love. Blessings.
Situation Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 2:59 PM
Oh boy I hate to cheat but this makes it easy.
One Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 3:03 PM
Cheat at what?
Y. Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 1:42 PM
WoW! Silent, This is romance at its finest. I am a hopeless romantic at heart, so you know I loved each word and stanza. I can’t pick what stood out the most, I enjoyed it all in its entirety. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 11:58 AM
Hello Silent, very delightful lovely poem!
Kendrick Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Ahhh!! A nice love poem. Very romantic. I am glad that you shared it with us. It reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Narain Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 10:00 AM
Great poem.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 9:43 AM
Love is of many a letter and word! Of unique imagery.. inspiring glossary.. and winging imagination.. you never fail your avid readers those passionate about poetry that deeply and genuinely speaks to the soul.. you never cease to spill a wondrous poetry that every single soul would like to read and cherish.. so beautiful what you have composed for the symphony of Love, Silent One! Deserving to be highly appreciated and honoured. God bless you. Best regards.
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