Love In Winter

Love in Winter

                              A winterbed with ice cold feet is hot.
These snowy buds outshine the season’s gray.
Her shiver lasts - in travels she’s been caught.
The blanket’s frost - a wave on chilly days.

Her eyelashes, and icicles, so thick.
                              She’s tossed to and fro in the ice queen’s squall.
A glacial melt — he’s down — the sea moves...quick —
With thunderclaps his chest does rise and fall.

Relaxed, refreshed — like peppermint, this glove
that fits. Like soft new fallen snow - they glow.
                               Entangled legs in the leggings of love.
A wonderland of lips, their drift is slow.

                               This sleigh, a winterbed of midnight dates.
                               The iditarod sun of figure-eights.


7/6/2019
Best sonnet 2019 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton
howmanysyllables.com used to check syllable count
miscounted winterbed as 2 syllables; should be 3

*buds - buddies, companions, friends
**winterbed - combo of two words
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Romios Avatar
July 14, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Hi Kim Congratulations Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 3:47 PM
Breathtaking imagery in this gorgeous Sonnet Kim. Congratulations on your second placement! : ) xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Thank you, Connie!
verse Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 4:00 AM
Amazing sonnet! Congrats on your placement :D
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 10:02 AM
Thank you, Eunice!
Adams Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 6:43 PM
Beautifully written Kim. Congrats on your win :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Ravidas Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Brilliant sonnet, Kim. Congrats and fave.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Gondolf Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 5:12 PM
It's always nice to have a bed warmer on a cold winter night. Congrats on your win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 10:33 PM
So true! Thank you, John!
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 4:33 PM
A wonderful write Kim, congrats on another win!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Thanks so much!!
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